Can someone quickly whizz through my leaving notice for work?

[DarkShadow]

I've only just got in and I start work in about 6 hours. I only just remembered my manager asked me to hand in my notice. Can someone briefly check this:

Dear Human Resources,

I am writing, to notify " " of my intention to leave for my student placement at Oxford.

I have spoken to my department manager (" ") and we’ve both agreed to the 18th of May to be my final weekend at " ". I’ve been asked to put this into writing for confirmation.

I have enjoyed my employment at " " and I would like to you thank you for your cooperation throughout this period.

My future employer (BMW) may, or will contact the relevant person for a reference.

After my placement I may return to " ". If I do, I will go through the correct procedure.

I wish yourself and the company a prosperous future.

Yours faithfully,


me!

 

[DarkShadow]

A 'phosphorus' future?

Do you mean 'prosperous'?

Otherwise, looks fine to me

Quality

Word picked out the typo for me! Honest

 

[DarkShadow]

you sorted a house yet? lol

I still haven't found anything ideal yet, and it's starting to become rather worrying!