Check my CV please.

Looks good got a sort of skills matrix in there which recruiters will search for keywords to flag up obvious picks.

well used space too.
 
Only comment I would make is that in your descriptions of job roles you talk about what you "do" rather than what you achieve and contribute and there is a subtle difference.

Much better to demonstrate to a perspective employer how you have added value previously with examples.. i.e. particular projects, business process improvement, customer satisfaction, etc... than just to say I support type of client / system with product.
 
Only comment I would make is that in your descriptions of job roles you talk about what you "do" rather than what you achieve and contribute and there is a subtle difference.

Much better to demonstrate to a perspective employer how you have added value previously with examples.. i.e. particular projects, business process improvement, customer satisfaction, etc... than just to say I support type of client / system with product.

You're right there is a subtle difference but I would say that both are needed to give a full picture.
 
Excellent comments people. Thank you very much.

I will take them all on board and hopefully craft a master CV that will get me the job I want. It's very much work in progress.

Thanks once again.
 
Lose the bartender job, brings nothing to the application - and then be more specific on terms of responsibilities and achievements in the other jobs. And don't be afraid to fluff it up!
 
Lose the bartender job, brings nothing to the application - and then be more specific on terms of responsibilities and achievements in the other jobs. And don't be afraid to fluff it up!

I'd ignore this. You don't want a break in your employment history and if by "fluff it up" phil means lie, I'd avoid that.
 
Hows this for a personal statement?

An IT Support Technician with over 10 years industry experience ranging from second line remote, customer facing and field based support to third line server and network troubleshooting. ITIL qualified with a vast knowledge of implementing IT business processes. Looking to secure a second line support role with the ability to integrate with third line resolver groups and transfer knowledge between teams.
 
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