Caporegime
Request, NOT demand.
even better, say, "I would be obliged if you could grant me an extension...etc"
even better, say, "I would be obliged if you could grant me an extension...etc"
Why did you waste all your time waiting for replys? Is it standerd practise in uni to not speak to tutors?
dont use the word appriciate mroe than once in the same sentace you knw more word right?
Dear David
I'm sorry to include you in this issue, but I consider it important, as it is likely to affect my grades in two assignments.
My grievance regards the module 'Developing your Potential' (TSM08115). On the 16th February I e-mailed Monika Foster about picking up materials for my flexible learning route and was instructed to contact Jennifer Graham, which I did on the 19th. This e-mail went unanswered, as did another sent on the 26th February. Contacting Monika Foster again proved unsuccessful and it was only on the 16th March that I heard back, having sent another ‘high-priority’ e-mail.
Having arranged a meeting with Jennifer, she warned me about my tone in my last e-mail and inferred during the meeting that she could make a complaint regarding my conduct. I was offered a non-negotiable extension period of one week, but as I have now to catch-up on an entire month’s worth of study and complete two separate assignments, this is likely to severely impact on my grades, along with the preparation time for my placement interview on the 31st. Even putting aside other assignments, as well as my job, I’m afraid I find this unacceptable.
I'm e-mailing you, as Year Head, to request a further extension. I feel that I am at an unfair disadvantage, through no fault of my own, and I am unwilling to let this impact on my grades for the year. An extension to the 7th April will give me enough time to concentrate on these assignments properly and allow me to read all materials and to gain a proper understanding of the module. A three-week extension may seem large, but I would stress that this is far shorter than the total time I should have had to complete the work and indeed only half the time spent attempting to contact Jennifer and Monika.
I appreciate you taking the time to read this and I look forward to hearing from you. Again, I apologise for including you in this matter, but I feel that my grades are too important to allow me to ignore this issue. For your consideration, I have attached both my e-mails with Jennifer and a screen-shot of my outbox, showing the dates and number of e-mails sent.
Yours sincerely
David
You are not going to get far in life emailing like that