CV Help

[doodah]

Can the lovely people of OcUK help critique this CV please? It isn't mine. I think it gets the message across but may need a little addition in the Globe Inn section possibly emphasising more on the managerial aspect of her role? She is employed as a bar maid but basically runs the place when the owners aren't in and will be officially when they go away for a week next month. Basically I think it needs a little more work but can't put my finger on it. Many thanks.

http://www.fileserve.com/file/QTJa2Wx/CV.docx

EDIT - originally uploaded older version. New version added.

 

[doodah]

Lol she is my girlfriend

Turns out she sent me an old version - will upload new version shortly.

EDIT - added new version.