CV Help

doodah · 16 Sep 2011 at 10:33

Can the lovely people of OcUK help critique this CV please? It isn't mine. I think it gets the message across but may need a little addition in the Globe Inn section possibly emphasising more on the managerial aspect of her role? She is employed as a bar maid but basically runs the place when the owners aren't in and will be officially when they go away for a week next month. Basically I think it needs a little more work but can't put my finger on it. Many thanks.

http://www.fileserve.com/file/QTJa2Wx/CV.docx

EDIT - originally uploaded older version. New version added.

gambitt · 16 Sep 2011 at 10:48

What is she applying for?

On first glance, too many headings, too many unnecessary repetitions. Eg. No need to list the same school name twice just to separate GCSEs and A-levels. "IT skills and Training" could be one heading. Also remove Curriculum Vitae title - no need for it, they know what document it is.

Edrof · 16 Sep 2011 at 10:49

Hmmm, think we need a pic of said girl before we can critique. Purely for professional reasons of course.

doodah · 16 Sep 2011 at 11:12

Lol she is my girlfriend

Turns out she sent me an old version - will upload new version shortly.

EDIT - added new version.