Seems a bit too spread out for my liking, I'd expect any such statement to be one paragraph, not three. Once you start getting into that level of detail it is more the sort of thing I'd expect in a covering letter.
Also with your A-levels on the CV, put your best grade (A) at the top. I know you've indented it but for me you should order them that way, if I glance down a CV and the first couple of grades are C's I might just skim on to the next bit.
Also with your A-levels on the CV, put your best grade (A) at the top. I know you've indented it but for me you should order them that way, if I glance down a CV and the first couple of grades are C's I might just skim on to the next bit.
