Feedback on website design

Soldato
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Hi all,

I've been having a bit of a play with the following website for a couple of weeks, and thought I'd open it up to you guys to give some feedback/thoughts.

My "brief" was just that - "I want black/green" is pretty much it, and been left to it! ;)

The content is a little sparse, but it's all I've currently got, I'm awaiting some more info (or if you've got some suggestions I can push his way of bits that might be a good idea to include)

The Contact form is using the Tectite PHP FormMailer, and the Showroom/gallery is a slightly modified PixelPost install.


Any constructive criticisms or suggestions welcomed - I'm learning all the time, and my design flair isn't the best! ;)

Oh yeah, the link (albeit temporary, of course):
http://www.my105e.com/xd


Garry
 
IMHO it could do with some form of graphic. Looks a bit bland and uninteresting.

Text appears to be some what blocky and dull to look at with there being very little else going on.

Im not long into this game so dont take what I say to heart, but Im sure others may agree
 
Yeah, I'm sure it needs some kind of graphics... I've been given few images to work with, and have been (currently) getting the basic HTML/CSS sorted, as well as the gallery/contact form :)

Pages I *know* need work (read: content) are the main page, and the About page :)
 
. I've been given few images to work with,

I know exactly how you feel. at my work they wanted an Intranet that was all singing and dancing but the client wasn't willing to pay for a decent system. everything I gave to them they weren't happy with they kept wanting little bits changed it got to a point I just gave up, I have other clients here paying me to look after their stuff.

One point i would make is on your web/ contact form is maby a bit more spacing. looks a bit jammed up.
 
lol you people still design websites for other people? I cannot do it, it drives me mental.

It seems a very simple design more like a FAQ than a website that is trying to advertise a service.
 
It does look very bland. Personally I would brighten it up and use the "I want black/green" as highlighting details within the site. Some imagery would be great!
 
Looking at it a bit more I think it could do with having a bit more structure, some vertical lines or boxes.
 
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