Written in perfectly rational English. Or if you prefer I'll put it into tetrameter.
It does address those given facts
journalism cannot give praise
to certain illicit products
lest it incur the great wrath of
the omnipotent commissar.
That better? And I haven't put any side to what I'm saying. Nor have I given my opinion on the subject matter.
A news site cannot portray that which is illicit as being good or beneficial: it contradicts and undermines the current legislation. Thus, this woman's 'conclusion' comes across as contrived. Think about it.
However, it's nice to have an open debate with someone taking the opposing stance.
It does address those given facts
journalism cannot give praise
to certain illicit products
lest it incur the great wrath of
the omnipotent commissar.
That better? And I haven't put any side to what I'm saying. Nor have I given my opinion on the subject matter.
A news site cannot portray that which is illicit as being good or beneficial: it contradicts and undermines the current legislation. Thus, this woman's 'conclusion' comes across as contrived. Think about it.
However, it's nice to have an open debate with someone taking the opposing stance.