How to write your own book, what experiences do you have?

@Jim99: That thing you said about writing on the train stuck with me. There’s something about that half-focus space – you’re moving, half-distracted, but also strangely free. I’ve written bits in airport lounges or waiting rooms that somehow felt more honest than when I’m “trying” to write at my desk. Maybe it’s the lack of pressure, like the words can sneak out sideways. Do you ever reread those train-written pages and find they’ve got a different rhythm to them? Less filtered maybe? Also curious: when you did force yourself for a few hours and hit that wall – did you learn to spot the signs early next time, or did burnout just ambush you again before you realised?

@NickK: Your “tree of questions” thing really intrigued me. The idea that it’s not a static list but branches – that’s smart, because a character never answers the same way twice anyway. Did you ever find the research around shamanism bleeding into your characters’ logic, like they started believing in patterns or rituals that you hadn’t planned? It sounds like you were building a whole culture, not just personalities. Do you still have that world in your head somewhere, or did it fade once the writing paused?

@Sankari: Right, non-fiction. That explains the precision in how you plan. I can imagine the satisfaction of structure there – no need to chase voices or moods. Still, do you ever miss that chaos a little? The possibility that a page might suddenly take off in a direction you didn’t expect? Or does clarity itself scratch that same creative itch, just in a tidier way?

@Faser Active: I get what you mean about AI narrowing the field – everyone chewing on the same pre-chewed advice. It’s like creative monoculture. Your thought about only writing when you want to – I wrestle with that. Some days the urge is gone, but if I wait for it to return, the gap stretches for weeks. Do you think there’s a middle ground – showing up even without full inspiration, but stopping before it turns mechanical? I wonder where that line sits for you.
 
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A long time ago but on these very forums (it was a dark and stormy night ...) I riled up a now banned forum member about a book* I was going to write but then did not.

Memories.


* it was not good in any meaningful way
 
A long time ago but on these very forums (it was a dark and stormy night ...) I riled up a now banned forum member about a book* I was going to write but then did not.

Memories.


* it was not good in any meaningful way

Don't bother with the movie either. "Mags: The Book that Never Was" currently ranking rock bottom on both Rotten Tomatoes and IMDb.
 
I've written a novella and I published it via draft2digital onto all the platforms they support back in July. I've actually sold one copy, which is one more than I expected.
 
The concept was mutiple cultures, the story shift between them as they created subarcs that fitted together.

For example one character was a female within an insect like culture, as a breakaway she is naturally shunned (loosely like an authoritarian hive like society). The shamanism provided the historic belief system that fed into the current belief system which connected to the larger arc (so you get the legends and stories coming true).
As the arc progresses it interacts with the others hence multiples complexity based on those details. For example you’ve asked the two cultures and protagonists questions - now place the two and ask questions letting them answer, noting conflicing points and similarities (they could become allies for example given the compatible answers or interdependencies or mortal enemies) don’t forget to look back in time too.
It generates a lot of detail, options and can write plot lines without thinking but you need to be able to infer to protect the reader from being dragged into overload.
The lore created becomes useful and there’s nothing stopping you from noting a plot line for later use and it will fit nicely into the existing story line.
I was using a mind map tool to track everything as it allowed the tree but also links across nodes to be defines. More convenient that paper for searching.

I did have the worlds in my head but the detail - that’s where the software helped. This was around 2009.
 
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Chapter 1 - My first code reader

Chapter 2 - I won nothing on the premium bonds this month

Chapter 3 - I keep getting abused on forums

the end
 
I was almost tempted to write a primer on Exonautics* last year but decided against it.

* Synaesthesic Imagineering
 
@Jim99: That thing you said about writing on the train stuck with me. There’s something about that half-focus space – you’re moving, half-distracted, but also strangely free. I’ve written bits in airport lounges or waiting rooms that somehow felt more honest than when I’m “trying” to write at my desk. Maybe it’s the lack of pressure, like the words can sneak out sideways. Do you ever reread those train-written pages and find they’ve got a different rhythm to them? Less filtered maybe? Also curious: when you did force yourself for a few hours and hit that wall – did you learn to spot the signs early next time, or did burnout just ambush you again before you realised?
Possibly, yes. The "train pages" were more liable to go down a rabbit hole, and sometimes I'd come back and actually scrap the whole concept. I agree that it's a lot easier to feel stuck when you're sat at a desk.

I don't think I learned to spot signs, so much as realising that forcing yourself to churn out 500 words might be a good way of getting into the habit, keeping the cogs turning, avoiding standstill etc - but forcing yourself to write for 3 hours because you've done nothing in the last week is counterproductive.

If decide that you'll do 30 minutes per day, or 500 words per day, I think the key is to keep to that. If you're feeling really inspired and passionate one day, and can spin out 5,000 words then great. If it's like scooping treacle out of a straw, then it's not going to help in the long run to push beyond the 30 minutes / 500 words you'd committed to.
 
Possibly, yes. The "train pages" were more liable to go down a rabbit hole, and sometimes I'd come back and actually scrap the whole concept. I agree that it's a lot easier to feel stuck when you're sat at a desk.

I don't think I learned to spot signs, so much as realising that forcing yourself to churn out 500 words might be a good way of getting into the habit, keeping the cogs turning, avoiding standstill etc - but forcing yourself to write for 3 hours because you've done nothing in the last week is counterproductive.

If decide that you'll do 30 minutes per day, or 500 words per day, I think the key is to keep to that. If you're feeling really inspired and passionate one day, and can spin out 5,000 words then great. If it's like scooping treacle out of a straw, then it's not going to help in the long run to push beyond the 30 minutes / 500 words you'd committed to.

All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy
 
All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy

Issue is to write a book you need to commit to it. Set aside a portion of the day and repeat religiously. Then when you get comments/feedback, you're back to writing again.

I've found that John Cleese's approach to writing scripts works for me - write it, sleep on it, throw away and write again, sleep on it, throw away and rewrite again for the final time. The process of sleeping on it and then throwing away so you're not limited by the first draft is great. You come back to the next draft with a different perspective and thinking.
 
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All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy
For sure, but it goes both ways in that so many people say "Oh I want to write a book" and then don't actually do anything about it.

Writing a few pages every summer is unlikely to get you there.
 
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