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Stolen and forward to my mate that loves Star Wars and loaves Harry Potter

Surprised no-one's posted this yet:
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*cough* rebirth *cough*[...] Raf was always a very shrewd & aware pedestrian from that day on, and always watched his step. [...]
Reaching a fork in the tunnels, the sound now further behind him than it was previously, he tossed the single copper coin in his possession and noted the result by the poor light streaming down from above.
1. Overcoming the Monster (and the Thrilling Escape from Death) - Doesn't apply because there wasn't a monster or deadly threat, except perhaps in his imagination
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I'm slightly curious, why does Raf toss the coin and what result was he looking for?
4. Voyage & Return - He didn't set off on a voyage (a voyage is a journey that one decides to make) he just fell down a hole and found his way back to the streets
Sorry, it was a while since I'd heard of it so the number was slightly wrong, the theory is there are 7 basic plots (not 5) and everything is a form of variation on them. Christopher Booker writes of the theory in his book from 2004 but I'm fairly sure I'd heard of it long before then.
1. Overcoming the Monster (and the Thrilling Escape from Death) e.g. Beowulf, War of the Worlds, Star Wars: A New Hope
2. Rags to Riches e.g. Cinderella, Great Expectations
3. The Quest e.g. The Odyssey, Watership Down
4. Voyage & Return e.g. Alice in Wonderland, Gone With the Wind
5. Comedy e.g. some Shakespeare, Jane Austen
6. Tragedy e.g. Macbeth, Anna Karenina
7. Rebirth e.g. Sleeping Beauty, A Christmas Carol
Falling down a magical hole sounds a lot like Alice in Wonderland to me, seeing as that was given as an example of a voyage story I don't think that all voyages can be considered as planned.
In order to qualify as a voyage, it must be a long journey (falling down a hole leading to the sewers beneath the street cannot be considered long) to a distant place (thirty feet down doesn't count as distant).
100 Years of Solitude doesn't fit into any of those.![]()
'Power' doesn't come into it. A quest can be a transcontinental dragonslaying or the purchase of a rissole from the local chippy. The relating of both is still a story. Scrooge was a miserly, miserable bugger who went on to become less so; the journey was fantastic, but the difference between origin and destination is relatively trivial. Maybe not proportional to the grandiose-sounding [and no doubt English-lesson-friendly] 'rebirth', but certainly fitting sufficiently within the archetype without needing to delve into the wordrobe for the shoehorn.No. A small change in a person's character doesn't constitute the use of such a powerful descriptor [...]
The one that Booker/semi-pro labelled "Voyage and return"; given that your protagonist went somewhere and came back again. Let's not start quibbling over semantics... oh, you already have:[...] For argument's sake though, let's pretend I've removed the sentence you quoted. Now which of the seven would you use?
Tell you what: you look up the definition of 'voyage', I'll look up the definition of 'pedant'In order to qualify as a voyage, it must be a long journey (falling down a hole leading to the sewers beneath the street cannot be considered long) to a distant place (thirty feet down doesn't count as distant)
I wouldn't say Harry, nor Potter, are particularly unusual names. Nor would I say that using names from somewhere else is plagiarism.
You come up with a fantasy story that has no parts that could be matched to any other fantasy story and I'll show you that it is no longer fantasy
There is always a quest, there is always a baddy, there is usually a youngster that the audience grows old with, there is always a good guy, there is always a magic thingy that they have... If you wish to use the plagiarism line then look no further than the Belgariad. Orphan, wizard/sorcerer that doesn't know it at first, lives with their aunt as a child, has the biggest baddie ever to face that no-one else could possibly face, has to face them on their own in the end, has an old man as a guardian, has a magical weapon...