[MP3] * Please critque new song! (Ark of Boyd) harmony metal

[ArmyofHarmony]

Hey,

The new song i was working on is finally complete,

www.planetcarl.com/music/ark.mp3

Its called "Ark of Boyd" and its a twisted version of Noah's Ark.


I played the guitar,
My friend did the singing/drums
and a guy (bumblelovesmusic.com) did the mixing and added the bass


opinions, comments?

 

[ArmyofHarmony]

Hey


Yeh i can see why you say the intro is too long, but i sort of wanted that ending of a song feeling on those guitar runs, if there was like rain effects and stuff over it, and simmering cymbals i think it would be better


Lol, mixed opinions about the "yeah!" bit, i think it should be louder


Getting real drums is always an issue, i mean... recording them is a hassle, and finding a drummer to do it is a hassle as well for now drumkit from hell + fruity loops is all we got.


cheers for ** comments

 

[ArmyofHarmony]

thanks for ** comments,


lol the "yeah!" is basically like marmite, love it or hate it


About the vocals, its difficult to decide what to do with them, especially on the chorus, where there are the vocal parts, and 3 guitar , well maybe 4 guitar.