Old Buildings

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Hey guys. Haven't posted here for a whilw.

These derelict buildings were part of the salt industry near Cadiz (Spain).

C&C welcome.

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Imo there is too much sharpening, especially in the 2nd image.
The highlights on stone appear to be slightly overblown too, both of these make the images very noisy to look at. (not meaning iso type noise)

The frame/crop appears odd too, they make me want to see the rest of the buildings, especially to the right of the 2nd shot.

Nice subject, surely the the water in such a climate has a good colour ? maybe try desaturating a bit, rather than making b/w.
 
Like the first shot, leaves me wondering were that path would take me and I like the textures in the building. Image doesn't feel perfectly balanced an I'd like to see the building in more context.

I don't really like two, the water feels to prominent and again I'd like to see more context. Perhaps next time if you tried a lower viewpoint and/or moved back a bit to incorprate a larger portrion the scene.

The processing is generally okay, the textures are nice and crisp but perhaps the odd parts of the scene are processed to heavily (water in number two). The border doesn't do much for me either.
 
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