One from the weekend. Sarah content!

sorry, i meant is that the same girl as the OP?

I'm reading between the lines here, is Sarah famous or at least well known on these forums? it seems 2 separate people from different parts of UK have photographed her...
 
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aye, thanks, it was just the op said "sarah content" which suggested she is famous in some way..

A couple of years ago Sarah was posted on this forums every couple of weeks :)

She is Tom's long term gf and they are both good friends of mine, I stayed at theirs over the weekend :)

I'm indoors now and fully intend to process the rest tonight, will post some later.
 
A couple of years ago Sarah was posted on this forums every couple of weeks :)

She is Tom's long term gf and they are both good friends of mine, I stayed at theirs over the weekend :)

I'm indoors now and fully intend to process the rest tonight, will post some later.

I see, thank you very much for the explanation! good pics anyway! nice work
 
Have another...

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^^^
This ones the best IMO so far, much much better than the first, it looks like a different girl.
Might want to liquefy the arm the on left side a bit, as it bulges out a little simply because there wasn't enough room for her to open her arms a little wider.
Maybe give the shadows a slight boost as well.
 
Wouldn't have guessed that the OP model is the one and same as in the others. I like ^^^ - nice atmosphere and natural pose. Shame there's a bit of refection in the glasses and that flare looks out of place.
 
Hey guys,


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Jake

Some general comments on the shot:

The flare is distracting and looks more like a malfunction than an intended artistic decision.

The shadow cast under her nose makes it look larger than it probably is, very unflattering.

Also the angle of her head and angle of shot pronunciate her chin and blends it into her neck, again unflattering and perhaps some direction saying to extend the neck and angle her glance downward would have worked to nullify this.

The angle of shot once again plays against the subject as you've shot her chest from a straight on position instead of with a slight downward angle which would have accentuated her assets and perhaps drawn attention away from the other faux pas with the composition of the image.

The models sneering glance shouts "what cha' lookin at?" which I'm not sure was intended or coincidence, the stray hair falling down across her face too should have been addressed at the shoot along with perhaps moving her pendant to a more symmetrical position.
 
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