start was like a swedish gay porn intro
while i know your qualified at what you do the narration is pretty bad. it sounds like you are either not comfortable speaking or you were made to speak slowly like a retarded robot so people could make out what you saying. sounds like you cant breathe and are being held back monotonous.
accent doesn't bother me but its not really professional which doesn't show off how good you actually are at oc.
this is just being honest some will probably rage or cry but im just putting as i see it.