part in an advert, help with application

unwashed potato! · 13 Aug 2006 at 21:27

my girlfriend has an oportunity to be in a new Nokia advert for tv and cinemas this thursday and she needs to write an applicaiton to be able to go to the audtition.

They give you what is needed but obviously we want to improve on it and make it stand out fom any others.

trouble we have is she aint not good at english, and i have been out of school for far too long (since april) to be able to write something amazing.

can anyone help improve the following statement. length can as long as you want but obviously not too long, dont want them to getbored. Thanks all

"I am outgoing, bubbly and available for the audition on Monday 14th August and filming on the 25th and 26th August."

btw if she gets the part she will come back for shooting for 2 days and get £2000 so obviously we really would like to get it.

thanks again

Noxis · 13 Aug 2006 at 21:32

"I give head for acting role"

Works every time.... :eek:

Seriously: I am not sure what can be added to your line, its direct and to the point but it by no means stands out imo.

Meatball · 13 Aug 2006 at 21:46

I have big boobs, I'm blonde and will do anything to go on telly?

TriedandTested · 13 Aug 2006 at 22:11

She should text the application. They'd be amazed.

Alasdair · 13 Aug 2006 at 22:14

addy_010 said:
"I am outgoing, bubbly and available for the audition on Monday 14th August and filming on the 25th and 26th August."

Don't even think of using the word "bubbly", personally I think it ranks up there with "nutty" in terms of making me want to avoid a person. Maybe fun-loving or confident, but not bubbly.

blade007 · 13 Aug 2006 at 22:17

Noxis said:
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funniest thing today

how is that she doesn't speak english?

G|mp · 13 Aug 2006 at 22:20

"I am outgoing, bubbly, do bukake and im available for the audition on Monday 14th August and filming on the 25th and 26th August."

Noxis · 13 Aug 2006 at 22:21

G|mp said:
"I am outgoing, bubbly, do bukake and im available for the audition on Monday 14th August and filming on the 25th and 26th August."

"Will give blumpkins"

Scam · 13 Aug 2006 at 22:25

I wouldnt say bubbly tbh :\

"I am an outgoing, confident and professional actress. I am available for the auditions on Monday 14th August and filming on the 25th and 26th August."

Not great tbh, could do more if you give us more.

fatmas · 13 Aug 2006 at 22:27

Has she been in anything before? Include past experience?

"andy" · 13 Aug 2006 at 22:28

Noxis said:
"Will give blumpkins"

oh god had never heard that un before and lgoogled

urban dictionary said:
Our boss was late to our weekly meeting because he was getting a blumpkin.

LMFAO

Azza · 13 Aug 2006 at 22:29

Some great advise there guys, well done

Brizzles · 13 Aug 2006 at 22:38

addy_010 said:
trouble we have is she aint not good at english, and i have been out of school for far too long (since april) to be able to write something amazing.

"she aint not good at english"

She isn't the only one .

Don't try to write something amazing , try to write something legible.

Mark

Al Vallario · 13 Aug 2006 at 22:42

Azza said:
Some great advise there guys, well done

Easily pleased?

sphen · 13 Aug 2006 at 22:44

Scam said:
"I am an outgoing, confident and professional actress. I am available for the auditions on Monday 14th August and filming on the 25th and 26th August."

Agreed, I heard somewhere bubbly implies fat. I'm out of touch with modern life though.

Is it only this statement that you will be submitting? Surely she will need to write more than that?