Please can someone review my CV?

Let's look at your preamble:

As an individual with experience working in the IT support and development fields, I have an understanding of the importance of good collaboration between these two areas of an organisation, especially in the medium sized business environment. My experience working at my previous post instilled in me how paramount good customer communication is, and how timing and good IT support is everything when deploying projects for customers.


I am passionate about the software and computing industry and are currently looking to secure a position with an employer whom I can develop a long-standing career with. I enjoy the opportunity to be able to contribute to the success of the business while working in a challenging and engaging environment that affords me the ability to develop my skillset and take on new ideas.

This is logorrhea with bad grammar to boot. You want one short paragraph. Distil it. And move some of the items to achievements or responsibilities in your work history. Interdepartmental liaison and customer service skills are always good. You should also lead off with what's in the second paragraph.

I work well whether in a team or independently and always conduct myself with a polite and courteous manner. Please do not hesitate to contact me for any clarifications. Thank you for your consideration.

Everyone will say that first sentence; demonstrate it in your work history. The latter two sentences belong in your covering letter.
 
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