Poetry

anksta said:
fair point penski, I've spent a while looking for small competitions and alike, its not like I really want to publish a book with 75 poems in, just wouldnt mind putting it somewhere where it will be read by people I dont know, not here before you say anything.
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I will if you will ;)

*n
 
Post some here.

My massive ego ensures that any criticism goes unnoticed so it's no skin off my nose.

You bowl first, my good man ;)

*n
 
Tangent time!

I wrote this one when I was about 13 and fed up with the cool-to-be-anti-establishment-and-anti-capitalist drones that seemed to be everywhere back then. I'm damn proud of it!

Peaceful slogan years!
But I'd rather have the bomb,
Than these damn hippies.

*n
 
Ok, I'll write one, before I start, I dont mind criticism (by all means, tell me how to make it better) but please dont take the mick, its not appreciated.

Only One Here

Theres only one here where there should be 2
Laughing and learning and loving and living
One half of a whole, one part of a piece
Theres only one here but there should be 2

Theres only one here where there should be 2
Growing together and in love forever
one shard of a pane, one scrap of whats left
Theres only one here, why isnt there 2?

Theres only one here where there should be 2
Sharing their lives and doing whats right
the shape of a shador, a hint of the past
Theres only one here, let there be 2

Took me 10 minutes last night at 3 in the morning, not that good I know but I'm knew at this and it makes me feel better, so it cant be that bad can it?
 
anksta said:
Joined Deviant Art by the way, thanks to whoever suggested it.
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Np, i post a lot of my poetry on there and i seem to get some feedback which is always good, It is also scanned by businesses so if yours is outstanding then you may get contacted through it.

Good luck.
 
reflex said:
Np, i post a lot of my poetry on there and i seem to get some feedback which is always good, It is also scanned by businesses so if yours is outstanding then you may get contacted through it.

Good luck.
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thanks, your not an emo are you?
 
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