robot girl

Threepwood said:
a work bot might have a robot top and a companion droid bottom
some people even have sex with thier machines, typically not with companion bots, even if they are given a body which is compatible with sex. it's mainly work bots that are equipped with sex parts
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I would watch this movie, as long as it does not ask for age verification?
 
Rroff said:
It is interesting where the "reality blends" - I've messed about with AI generated music where I've written a framework for the lyrics, used AI to flesh it out, then gone in and tweaked it by hand - the end product is probably about 25% AI contribution, whereas someone else might have used 2-3 keywords and let AI do all the rest and got similar results.

Personally always try to be upfront as to how much is AI generated.

EDIT: Also an interesting one for me is the music itself - I'm a bit rusty now but I could reproduce the music generated by AI putting samples together in something like Reason - but I'd struggle to create it originally.
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The lyrics are mine, and the real lyric is 'where reality bends, not blends, but I like blends a lot, I wish that I'd have come up with that now, I'll use that in the book. I guess in this instance bends, and blends mean the same thing, kinda.bends is the feeling I was after though,
I only use the generate lyrics option to showcase the program to someone, asking them to describr e themselves , and their life into it then see whaty it spits out, the results are usually great, and often funny, my nephew's rock song "george's adventures was awsome
other than that I don't generate lyrics, it just doesn't give me what I want, I have to do that myself, I have other poems on here that show I am capable

I only say that I made the music, because * I* had to spend hours with the AI song maker, inputing different prompts, and listening to every result, then changing accordingly, on and on, until *I* have reached the desired result, personally, I think that is enough original input to claim that it is mine,it took a long time to get it to emphasise the word "pulse for example" the lyrics are in the comments section btw,
Thanks.
 
Top quality AAA+++ post.. would never read again..

If you do every try to actually publish anything please, please, please read back what you have written before you publish... pretty please... ;)
 
Threepwood said:
I only say that I made the music, because * I* had to spend hours with the AI song maker, inputing different prompts, and listening to every result, then changing accordingly, on and on, until *I* have reached the desired result, personally, I think that is enough original input to claim that it is mine,it took a long time to get it to emphasise the word "pulse for example" the lyrics are in the comments section btw,
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OK, so it is AI music then, thanks for clearing it up.

For the lols, I put the first post into ChatGPT.

1. The core premise is solid
  • Worldbuilding idea: future humanity has low birth rates due to environmental damage (forever chemicals, plastic particles) and a collapse in sexual/romantic interest.
  • Most humans are lab-grown; the rich treat natural-born children as status symbols.
  • Two main classes of robots:
    1. Companion droids (Sony 305s) — high-emotion AI, human-like partners, not for sex.
    2. Workbots (Musk 101s) — low-emotion AI, mostly mechanical labourers, sometimes with sexual functionality.
  • A third category: Proff droids (10/10s) — professional service robots (doctors, police, teachers, etc).

    That’s all clear enough as a framework.
2. Where it gets contradictory or muddy

  • You say people have no interest in sex or romance, but then spend a lot of time describing sex with robots, workbots designed for sex, and people forming romantic attachments to objects. That undermines the initial claim unless you clarify it’s a minority or fetish subculture.
  • Companion droids are described as human-like partners but also as fighting off sexual advances — yet in the same breath, you say they can be fitted with sexual functionality. This needs a consistent stance: are they never intended for sex, or is it an optional but socially frowned-upon feature?
  • Workbots are said to be clumsy if moving fast, but also some are used for sex — you’d have to explain how clumsiness is compatible with sexual use without accidental injuries becoming the norm.
  • The “Japanese versions of robot girl” line comes out of nowhere and isn’t explained.
  • The bit about teenagers falling in love with washing machines is more whimsical comedy than the rest of the piece, which so far reads more like dystopian sci-fi. It shifts tone without warning.
3. Writing style issues

  • Sentences run on without punctuation or breaks, so some ideas blur together.
  • Names of products/robots are inconsistent (“sony three oh five” vs “Sony 305” vs “sony three oh fives”). Consistency would make it feel more believable.
  • Some tech details are a bit odd: e.g., “breathe” for an android — why would they need to? If it’s for realism, say so.
  • Jumps between unrelated points (slums, then sex robots, then coffee machines in hospitals) make it harder to follow.
Summary:

It’s not total rubbish, but it’s messy and self-contradictory as it stands. The worldbuilding has potential, but you’d need to:
  • Decide whether the “lack of interest in sex” is truly general, or just for most people while a niche market still exists.
  • Make robot categories consistent in purpose and features.
  • Keep tone consistent (either full dystopia or mix of dystopia + comedy, but balance it).
  • Tighten up structure so each idea flows into the next logically.
 
SimonRigga said:
Top quality AAA+++ post.. would never read again..

If you do every try to actually publish anything please, please, please read back what you have written before you publish... pretty please... ;)
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I too know people who have fallen afoul to self published Amazon ebooks with 4-5 star ratings.
 
Feek said:
The “Japanese versions of robot girl” line comes out of nowhere and isn’t explained.
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First, thanks for reviewing my idea, and replying constructively, you have helped me clear things up in my head a great deal.
the japanese is just japanese versions that i'll put up on youtube, when I choose the best one, and put with japanese in the title and description that I'll put onto you tube since the largest sex robot scene is over there, songer is pretty amazing in that, as long as you have the paid for custom lyrics option, then you can input translated text into it, and it will automatically sing it in the same language!I'm planning on trying gaelic next.
I plan on using my poor english grammer, in a way that I can turn that on for robot thinking, or scenes where it's a robot who is witnessing what is happening, then turn it off, using better grammar for other parts, as it stands, I'm lazy because i'm doing everything with one hand so it is easier just to babble on. without all the extra key presses!
I know it is bad, but it is all that I have to work with,
In short: thank you
 
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@Diddums @Feek @Thekwango

Well, here is the compiled japanese version
I'm pretty chuffed about this one, it's the first time, that I've used multiple images, and had to choose them appropiately, and put them in the right places for the best effect., I'm still not happy enough with my timings, but I'm learning a lot as I go.

I'm quickly learning that original image source quality, and resolution is *very* important, because they will only look even worse after being compiled if they are bad quality to begin with!
I'm using a free AI program to master the sound, I think that it is pretty good, and sounds a lot better than the orginal, one of the settings is to give it a warm cassette tape sound
please do watch it all before judging:
 
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I didn’t read the OP but skimmed it and saw sex with robots. Not my jam but it’s 2025 so you do you.

But thank you for creating the thread because the replies have been top tier.
 
Diddums said:
Whist I do joke around, I must be honest, it's nice seeing you get creative and play with stuff. Keep it up!
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thanks man, appreciated, I will do, but I'm running out of content now, I have a few poems that I've not shared yet, but they are broken heart poems, not sure that I want to go back there, yet!
 
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