Site Critique

[ferretmaster]

Hey,
just finished the design for my collective website was wondering if anyone could note any improvements that i could make. The site is running on the Textpattern CMS with the design created by me with xhtml and css. Any comments will be appreciated.



Davis Fotherswine

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[Jaffa_Cake]

Did you check to see how it looked in many browsers? For me in firefox the black background on the left goes over on top of the blue next to it, makes it look untidy.

Constructive criticism hmmm....

I don't much like the bog-standard links, blue on a blue background.

The grey at the bottom doesn't do much for me.. just looks out of place, same with the main buttons. Looks as if they have been plonked there without much thought.

I'm thinking maybe enlisting the help of some borders between the changing backgrounds.

Maybe centering the whole thing too would make it look a tad better, so I can slide my chair back into the middle of my screen

Maybe do a new design and compare ideas between the two

Being as constructive as possible ! Hope the ideas help.

 

[ferretmaster]

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Ok i have made some improvements in my spare time! Do you have any ideas for the links above as they do seem a bit plain, but i need some sort of inspiration for them.

 

[Amp34]

The major issue for me is the black on blue of the text, it makes it quite difficult to see.