Hello everybody,
I need some help with my poor english.
Basically I need to write to Direct Line what happened about 10 months ago. (Even though I told them what happened just after the accident had occurred).
Your help will be to make sense from what I wrote here
(correct all the mistakes).
Please and thank you for any help.
It’s a short story.
I was driving along the middle lane King Street in Hammersmith towards Hammersmith Broadway. I stopped my car just before the zebra crossing when the red light lit. However the bus driving next to my right side of the car kept driving and then left rear side of the bus hit my car causing damage to my cars front wheel, mirror and some body damage. At the time of the accident my car was static. The accident occurred 07/09/2005 at about 1p.m.
Well what I can tell you more is that that time there was really a lot of traffic and all cars were moving really slowly. And I’m not saying that the bus drove when there was red light, it could have been still yellow, but I stopped my car anyway (you know how people drive when there a lot of traffic around).
I did call police that time as well, didn’t know what to do with my car in the middle of a very busy road, as it was not drivable that time.
I know this has a lot of grammar mistakes that’s why I need your help to make sense of it.
Here is a diagram I quickly just made.
So if you kindly rewrite it so it make sense please.
Thank you for all the help.
I need some help with my poor english.
Basically I need to write to Direct Line what happened about 10 months ago. (Even though I told them what happened just after the accident had occurred).
Your help will be to make sense from what I wrote here
(correct all the mistakes).Please and thank you for any help.
It’s a short story.
I was driving along the middle lane King Street in Hammersmith towards Hammersmith Broadway. I stopped my car just before the zebra crossing when the red light lit. However the bus driving next to my right side of the car kept driving and then left rear side of the bus hit my car causing damage to my cars front wheel, mirror and some body damage. At the time of the accident my car was static. The accident occurred 07/09/2005 at about 1p.m.
Well what I can tell you more is that that time there was really a lot of traffic and all cars were moving really slowly. And I’m not saying that the bus drove when there was red light, it could have been still yellow, but I stopped my car anyway (you know how people drive when there a lot of traffic around).
I did call police that time as well, didn’t know what to do with my car in the middle of a very busy road, as it was not drivable that time.
I know this has a lot of grammar mistakes that’s why I need your help to make sense of it.
Here is a diagram I quickly just made.
So if you kindly rewrite it so it make sense please.
Thank you for all the help.
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