something's wrong

[blade007]

with my design

the headings look a bit clunky, too big? too bright? or just not right

I can't decide

have been working on this for a bit now and can't seem to get anything better.

any ideas?

here is site

here

 

[shifty_uk]

Hmmm...the font in the header looks a bit wrong. Perhaps try a different font? Its a window tinting company? Why not try a strong font, a nice bold one? Try making the letter spacing a little smaller aswell, and use a sans serif font for the tag line.

The red against the black is quite good. It might look better with more content!

...Just my opinions

[edit]
I misread your post, I thought you said that you can't decide whats wrong with your header.

Well they do seem a bit chunky. Perhaps try and make the red backdrop smaller?

 

[blade007]

Hmmm...the font in the header looks a bit wrong. Perhaps try a different font? Its a window tinting company? Why not try a strong font, a nice bold one? Try making the letter spacing a little smaller aswell, and use a sans serif font for the tag line.

The red against the black is quite good. It might look better with more content!

...Just my opinions

[edit]
I misread your post, I thought you said that you can't decide whats wrong with your header.

Well they do seem a bit chunky. Perhaps try and make the red backdrop smaller?

thanks for your opinion. much appreciated.

I think I may chop the top half (the darker red) off the heading backdrops and see how it looks.

I think it would be better with a s-serif (the yellow line) too ... I'll try and put him off his choice of script.