Anyone fancy reading a script I wrote?

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Alright, me and my mate have written a TV pilot script. I think I've asked for feedback before and people have given some good input so I'd appreciate it.

I've already met with the BBC about it, that was the 4th draft and I got some good feedback. This is the 7th draft and is miles better.

We're just getting some fresh eyes on it this week with the plan to send it out by Friday. Anyone wanting to give it a read over I'd be really grateful, pointing out any glaring errors or just telling us if they don't like it.

Either way, I'd be really appreciative of anyone willing to give it a quick read.

Thanks OCUK
 
I'd be up for it.

I'm always being told that I notice spelling and grammatical errors that others wouldn't. Maybe it's just because I'm a pedantic **** :o
 
I meant to ask, is it urgent you get feedback asap, or will tomorrow be ok? I'm on nights atm, so I'll prolly leave it til things haven't quietened down and all the staff have naffed off home.
 
Rizo-UK said:
same here, ill take a read over it for you.

Jon
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no email in your trust mate, send one over to mine in the trust and I'll send it on.

Thanks


Any other takers? Not got a limit, and appreciate everything.

Just think, when this DEFINITELY gets made and makes the Office look like 2 Pints of Lager you can say you were in on it.*


**this might not happen
 
VirtualAdept said:
I meant to ask, is it urgent you get feedback asap, or will tomorrow be ok? I'm on nights atm, so I'll prolly leave it til things haven't quietened down and all the staff have naffed off home.
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no mate, obviously it'd be nice tonight but there's no hurries.

We have a producer looking it over at the minute (he's not going to make it) and he said he'll probably take a few days and it won't be going anywhere until he's put his two penneth in so as long as it's before Tuesday or Wednesday say, that'll be fine.

Thanks again.
 
vonhelmet said:
You mean the play what you wrote?
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no mate had you read that before? The one about the hardware shop?

I had a reading of that done the other week, that still wants finishing but I just need this one done and gone first.

Van Hellseek said:
Link will do fine.
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I'd rather email it to be honest, would you like to read it?

Zefan said:
Yup.
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Ok mate, will send now

Ahleckz said:
You should speak to Forde, he's pitched a TV programme recently.
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Really? Maybe I'll do that then, I've spoken to Forde before, if it's who I think it is anyway.


I've just sent it to my mother who came back immediately telling me she didn't like it, says we've "lost the plot" and previous versions were better.

I'm surprised at how I'm not mad. I don't agree with it and think this one not only makes sense, but it goes somewhere as well, sets up enough to want to read more while answering enough to have an end to an episode.

If anyone else who has read it/wants to read it wants to agree with my mother then go for it, you can even have previous drafts if you really like to see if you can see what she means.
 
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