Anyone fancy reading a script I wrote?

GravyMonster · 25 May 2011 at 11:49

anksta said:
your email isn't there mate, have to send me one and I'll get it off,.

Strange, my email is in my trust when I look at it?

YGM anyway.

Pestilence · 25 May 2011 at 12:27

Fire me a copy and I'll let you know what I think mate.

anksta · 25 May 2011 at 12:29

sent to both.

Thanks

valve90210 · 25 May 2011 at 12:59

If you're still loking for people to have a read I'd be happy to take a look at it.

Valve

Razor-BladE · 25 May 2011 at 13:09

How long has it taken for people to receive the email? Because I still haven't received anything, and I've checked the junk mail as well.

Doctor McNinja · 25 May 2011 at 18:30

Spunkey said:
Strange, my email is in my trust when I look at it?

YGM anyway.

Same here.

anksta · 25 May 2011 at 20:15

Razor-BladE said:
How long has it taken for people to receive the email? Because I still haven't received anything, and I've checked the junk mail as well.

have you got it now mate?

Sent to another few people today, some people must have some feedback

chuck990 · 25 May 2011 at 20:24

still not got the email :/

anksta · 25 May 2011 at 20:36

chuck990 said:
still not got the email :/

sent now mate

I know a few people who've asked for it have been missed out and I apologise, but still, I have way over 20 emails in my sent items, and maybe 5 or 6 have said anything back.

I'll have to start employing a one in one out scenario soon.

nydryl · 25 May 2011 at 20:39

If you want another set of eyes I've got a spare few hours tonight. Could have a read and get back to you later.

chuck990 · 25 May 2011 at 20:53

got it, about halfway through, first thoughts - try channel 4 rather than the beeb

chuck990 · 25 May 2011 at 20:58

also, page 14 1st line "do it cash it in hand" is that a typo?

also page 28 sparrows first bit "cant get you the cash?" another typo?

neil3k · 25 May 2011 at 21:29

email in trust

anksta · 25 May 2011 at 21:42

chuck990 said:
also, page 14 1st line "do it cash it in hand" is that a typo?

also page 28 sparrows first bit "cant get you the cash?" another typo?

we got the first one, not the second one though, thanks

Razor-BladE · 25 May 2011 at 21:48

Yup I've received it now

Thanks.
I'll be a few days as I have an exam tomorrow (what am I doing on here :confused:

) and Friday

Edit: Depending on how long it is, it might be a week and a bit as I have 3 exams next week. :/ If that's not too late to give feedback!

blairw · 25 May 2011 at 22:55

email in trust - I will read it tomorrow at work

anksta · 4 Jul 2011 at 16:03

hello people, I entered the script into a BAFTA competition today. 3 winner placements get to go to New York TV Festival in September and meet loads of American TV producers and things.

I doubt I'll win but you never know, just wanted to say thanks to everyone who gave feedback, it all helped and what I didn't change I used in the season synopsis and character breakdowns I had to write for this entry form.

Just getting ready to send it plenty of producers and agents who are willing to read unsolicited material.

Does anyone know anyone any TV producers/agents/managers/directors or anyone else who works in the TV biz that might be interested on giving a spec script a once over?

Cheers

MikeHunt79 · 4 Jul 2011 at 16:15

^ I've donE a few tv jobs in the past so I'll see if I can get hold of some contacts for you.

nydryl said:
Email in trust if you want another set of eyes to proof read it.

Likewise, I be happy to give it a read and give you some feedback if you like.

Redgie · 4 Jul 2011 at 16:22

Email in trust

anksta · 4 Jul 2011 at 16:46

MikeHunt79 said:
^ I've donE a few tv jobs in the past so I'll see if I can get hold of some contacts for you.

Likewise, I be happy to give it a read and give you some feedback if you like.

Redgie said:
Email in trust

check your emails guys.

Thanks