Anything wrong with my ad?

I think the real problem is the appearance. Don't know about you lot but for me and everybody I know the first thing when looking at a car ad is to check the photos. Only if it looks good would I bother reading the text. If it looks ropey then skip right back out of the ad and keep looking.
 
As above, photos aren't great, either really zoomed out or too close and cropped part the car off. Get a decent front 3/4 angle picture for the first one.
 
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