Can you post/quote some example pictures, just so I have a better understanding of your view?
certainly.
First some general compositional observations.
http://www.rhysphotograph.me/wp-content/uploads/2014/08/Caswell_House_Wedding-001.jpg
The horizon across the center doesn't work well for this kind of image, it works well to emphasize symmetry such as reflecions.
http://www.rhysphotograph.me/wp-content/uploads/2014/08/Caswell_House_Wedding-008.jpg
I would prefer a vertical composition and a step closer so the girl on the left is no clipped.
http://www.rhysphotograph.me/wp-content/uploads/2014/08/Caswell_House_Wedding-006.jpg
I would like space for the ducks to move in to on the left and remove the dead space to the right, balancing the image
http://www.rhysphotograph.me/wp-content/uploads/2014/08/Caswell_House_Wedding-027.jpg
Person on the left is clipped
http://www.rhysphotograph.me/wp-content/uploads/2014/08/Caswell_House_Wedding-030.jpg
Dead space on the left. the processing has blown the sky, this highlights [no pun intended
] my issues with the PPing.
http://www.rhysphotograph.me/wp-content/uploads/2014/08/Caswell_House_Wedding-051.jpg
I would prefer wider to encompass the entire dress, or tighter to emphasize the hands.
http://www.rhysphotograph.me/wp-content/uploads/2014/08/Caswell_House_Wedding-084.jpg
Did you apply an artificial blue, looks wrong to me
http://www.rhysphotograph.me/wp-content/uploads/2014/08/Caswell_House_Wedding-101.jpg
http://www.rhysphotograph.me/wp-content/uploads/2014/08/Caswell_House_Wedding-163.jpg
http://www.rhysphotograph.me/wp-content/uploads/2014/08/Caswell_House_Wedding-026.jpg
There are a few photos where you have clipped at the elbow.
Would be nicer to crop higher or lower, not at the joint.
Similar
http://www.rhysphotograph.me/wp-content/uploads/2014/08/Caswell_House_Wedding-172.jpg
It kind of gives the impression of an amputee, just a few inches higher or lower just makes it more pleasing IMO
DoF issue:
http://www.rhysphotograph.me/wp-content/uploads/2014/08/Caswell_House_Wedding-137.jpg
I would be happy if the face was either much softer or sharp, but here is just not enough contrast to the hand/glass
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Now for some example of distracting foreground OOF elements:
http://www.rhysphotograph.me/wp-content/uploads/2014/08/Caswell_House_Wedding-020.jpg
Whatever causes that shadow i don't know but it distracts me.
http://www.rhysphotograph.me/wp-content/uploads/2014/08/Caswell_House_Wedding-024.jpg
This just doesn't work for em. The reflection on the girl on the left looks awkward and uncomfortable, it looks like someone tried to purposely hide someones identity
http://www.rhysphotograph.me/wp-content/uploads/2014/08/Caswell_House_Wedding-028.jpg
The bleaching from the reflection just doesn't look right IMO
http://www.rhysphotograph.me/wp-content/uploads/2014/08/Caswell_House_Wedding-032.jpg
That purple Halo is just not pleasant IMO. Very distracting.
http://www.rhysphotograph.me/wp-content/uploads/2014/08/Caswell_House_Wedding-034.jpg
Likewise the green foliage blur, it doesn't work as a framing element to me but is obscuring part of the subject.
http://www.rhysphotograph.me/wp-content/uploads/2014/08/Caswell_House_Wedding-039.jpg
As above, the red foliage is not helping framing
but here it works much better:
http://www.rhysphotograph.me/wp-content/uploads/2014/08/Caswell_House_Wedding-042.jpg
http://www.rhysphotograph.me/wp-content/uploads/2014/08/Caswell_House_Wedding-044.jpg
Women with green top and camera sticking out is in the way
This is way better:
http://www.rhysphotograph.me/wp-content/uploads/2014/08/Caswell_House_Wedding-045.jpg
http://www.rhysphotograph.me/wp-content/uploads/2014/08/Caswell_House_Wedding-047.jpg
50% of the frame is a blurred green blob, and much of the rest os just the ground, but one of the man's hands is clipped.
http://www.rhysphotograph.me/wp-content/uploads/2014/08/Caswell_House_Wedding-048.jpg
Similar. It just kind of feels that you weren't invited and were hiding in the bushes without getting a good view.
http://www.rhysphotograph.me/wp-content/uploads/2014/08/Caswell_House_Wedding-121.jpg
The person in the foreground is just distracting since it obscures
While here it is not a big deal:
http://www.rhysphotograph.me/wp-content/uploads/2014/08/Caswell_House_Wedding-132.jpg
http://www.rhysphotograph.me/wp-content/uploads/2014/08/Caswell_House_Wedding-147.jpg
way too much blurred blob for me
http://www.rhysphotograph.me/wp-content/uploads/2014/08/ab-378-of-466.jpg
The blossom is just distracting.
i''m not saying you can't add some out of focus stuff around the edges, it can work great to frame the subject, but if it dominates it looks like you failed or are an undercover detective.
Here is an excellent example of it working well:
http://www.rhysphotograph.me/wp-content/uploads/2014/08/Caswell_House_Wedding-064.jpg
So I have just picked out examples that I don;t like and would reject. there are plenty that i really like If you want O could go through later and pick some highlights.