E-Shot Feed back

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If you currently not seen the new E-Shot and the Amazing deals, please follow the link below

http://www.overclockers.co.uk/newsletter.php




So the first new shiny E-Shot was released last night / this morning.

The E-Shot had a whole new redesign, and looks much easier on the eye.

Please can i have some feedback, if anyone has had any problems viewing the E-shot and other graphical problems please leave a comment.

I know in Outlook there have been some problems which i am currently working on, but tested Chrome/Hotmail/Yahoo/Gmail all seem to be up to par.


Current questions are:

at what time did you recieve the E-Shot,

Has anyone signed up for E-Shots and not recieved any?

Have you ordered yet? ;)


Many Thanks

Valkia
OcUK Marketing / Graphic Designer
 
Hi,

I received mine at 04:35 this morning.

My first impression is that the newsletter is a bit busy, it makes the deals feel less significant because I'm swamped with information. I personally think it would work better if you focused more on the great deals instead of pushing as much as possible.

Graphically it looks good, although the buttons along the top could do with some tweaking - the text is quite badly rendered.
 
The design certainly pushes the products more at you. Very nicely done. :).

Alas, I won't be making a purchase this time around, spent far too much on OcUK these past months!
 
LiE said:
Hi,

I received mine at 04:35 this morning.

My first impression is that the newsletter is a bit busy, it makes the deals feel less significant because I'm swamped with information. I personally think it would work better if you focused more on the great deals instead of pushing as much as possible.

Graphically it looks good, although the buttons along the top could do with some tweaking - the text is quite badly rendered.
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As my time limit was - i didn't have too much time to arrange in the best manner this time round, and the top half had redesign at 9pm last night.

Thanks for the feedback - will take this into mind.
 
I can't help but agree with the point that its a bit noisy. As a physical brochure/flyer, it looks very snazzy, but as an email I'd get annoyed with it I think. I'd much rather have the straight numbers in an email than a collection of pretty pictures.

valkia said:
Dont worry i will be grammer police on the next one :)
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I can't tell if that was intentional genius or accidental irony.
 
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valkia said:
Nicely spotted, i was dropped in saying that the next day i had to have the E-Shot out and didn't get too much time to proof read all of it.. Dont worry i will be grammer police on the next one :)
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S'all good! Apart from being a bit cluttered and the odd spelling mistake I thought it was pretty good going :)
 
Generally it's fine, bit cluttered and 750px is a bit of a weird width to design to, 960 would be more appropriate. Space it out a bit more and it will improve it no end.
 
That's really nice, actually. Slick, yet not overly in-your-face.


There's always something about OCUK's monitors that make me want to buy them...
 
valkia said:
Intentional Genius :)

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Carry on.
 
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