http://www.je-design.co.uk/katz/roxy/5.jpg is my fav, the only suggestion I can make it maybe try a little diffusion over the lights ti soften the light.
I am concerned by these pictures and with how much fill in noise I can see you have tried to recover from the shadows.
Two flashes? Have that shot on low power by chance?
You should have called to say we were doing a shoot man. That hurts.
I suppose you did pretty good without me though How many flashes were you using?
Think this one is a very good image even if its a little dark on the face.
Thanks mate, I was thinking they could use it as a leaflet or price list or something