I need your help.....

VIRII · 27 Aug 2006 at 16:05

Adz said:
http://resized.filevend.com/elrazur/1.wma
http://resized.filevend.com/elrazur/2.wma
http://resized.filevend.com/elrazur/3.wma

I haven't listened to these so make no reference as to the quality/content .

Having listened to those I can safely say El Raz is as white as El Ton and of the same flamboyant persuasions.

Lyrical breakdown:

I this, I that, I rock, I love me, I this, I that, you know you love me too, I rock, I love me, I this, I that, expensive items, fast car, I this I that I love me.

Typical of the genre really

Adz · 27 Aug 2006 at 16:08

Hmm... Sorry, it's a no from me. Sharon?

axe · 27 Aug 2006 at 16:08

Man EL your are clean like a weasel

cleanbluesky · 27 Aug 2006 at 16:09

Not a bad effort, vocals could have been higher in the mix.

I'm better your sense of timing has got better now... it's a bit 4/4 and on the beat

EDIT: I don't think its too on the beat actually, what it needs is a better structure from whoever wrote the music. You need a verse and chorus in there.

Korex eh?

I've got a few tracks with a good transition between verse/bridge/chorus... I wonder whether Mr Raz would be willing to rap over them if he isn't busy... I could edit out the vocals and some guitar bits of my tracks and hand them over. Might depend on what software Mr Raz is using

Biohazard · 27 Aug 2006 at 16:10

OMG is my reaction mate

axe · 27 Aug 2006 at 16:12

What Simon Thinks ... CLICK

DanTheMan · 27 Aug 2006 at 16:14

I quite like them but think your voice needs to be a bit more powerful. I think you should do a rap in Nigerian, it would sound cool.

Biohazard · 27 Aug 2006 at 16:15

middle one is the better of the three in my opinion, if a choice has to be made

j00ni · 27 Aug 2006 at 16:19

DanTheMan said:
I quite like them but think your voice needs to be a bit more powerful

Agreed. I'm as white as they come and conform pretty much to the sterotype of knowing nothing about rap/hip-hop, but it's certainly not a bad effort - better than I could do at attempting any genre tbh

It seems like it's just cool to have a go at El, I mean few people are offering constructive criticism, and I'd bet most didn't even give the guy's songs much of a chance.

edit: my flatmate just came into my room and asked who i was listening to, saying it was good. Then he's also as white as they come (despite sporting an impressive fro

)

edit2: I still think El's a filthy troll

VIRII · 27 Aug 2006 at 16:24

j00ni said:
It seems like it's just cool to have a go at El, I mean few people are offering constructive criticism, and I'd bet most didn't even give the guy's songs much of a chance.

After his thread about El Ton and rap it is only fair to have a little fun with El Raz and his attempt at rap

Still say what you like about El he's straight up and honest about how he feels and I like that, he also has a decent sense of humour and can take some flak on the chin without chucking his toys out the pram.

Zip · 27 Aug 2006 at 16:26

VIRII said:
After his thread about El Ton and rap it is only fair to have a little fun with El Raz and his attempt at rap
Still say what you like about El he's straight up and honest about how he feels and I like that, he also has a decent sense of humour and can take some flak on the chin without chucking his toys out the pram.

Talking about Toys and Prams has your wife popped yet? :confused:

VIRII · 27 Aug 2006 at 16:27

Zip said:
Talking about Toys and Prams has your wife popped yet?

Nope. She's bloody useless. Our previous daughter was 14 days late too

Still tomorrow they induce her so can't be long now.

LeperousDust · 27 Aug 2006 at 16:27

I must say, i expected much worse. Not bad at all, shame i'm not into rap/hip hop stuff too much though. Agreed 2 being the best, and the vocals need something more to them, more power, louder mixing, not sure what exactly.

Zip · 27 Aug 2006 at 16:28

VIRII said:
Nope. She's bloody useless. Our previous daughter was 14 days late too
Still tomorrow they induce her so can't be long now.

You have stubborn kids

They just dont want to leave there home

gord · 27 Aug 2006 at 16:30

No..no..no..no..no..n'no..no

Limit..

VIRII · 27 Aug 2006 at 16:33

Zip said:
You have stubborn kids
They just dont want to leave there home

LOL. It could be that or it could be that the dating method is a tad flawed as it uses measurements from scans to determine conception date.
My daughter is very,very tall for her age and I wonder if that is why the due date has been 2 weeks early twice now.

A2Z · 27 Aug 2006 at 16:41

im in a club....blah blah blah....how original :cool:

willd58 · 27 Aug 2006 at 16:49

You seem to talk a lot, but not actually say anything, thats the worst kind of rap!

Zip · 27 Aug 2006 at 16:49

VIRII said:
LOL. It could be that or it could be that the dating method is a tad flawed as it uses measurements from scans to determine conception date.
My daughter is very,very tall for her age and I wonder if that is why the due date has been 2 weeks early twice now.

I see, You have big stock that doctors arnt used to

Good luck when it finally does decided to kick and head butt its way out

VIRII · 27 Aug 2006 at 16:50

willd58 said:
You seem to talk a lot, but not actually say anything, thats the worst kind of rap!

Is there any other kind? But I think I see where you are coming from:

Chat Rap. Usually shortened to C.Rap?