i watched. the opponents were horrible to say the least.
OK:
1) when walling off you went pylon, gate, pylon, core all at the front ramp, you should put the pylon further back and just use the gate and core to wall - all it takes is a little push and they can take out both pylons and youv lost a gate and core.
2) 20secs wasted to start warp tech
3)NO SENTRYS! wtf - this is one of the biggest crimes in this game. not once did you build a sentry! do you know what a forcefield is? hellucination? <__ serious question/
4) supply blocked several times
5) 1st push and tanks. Tanks you say? my stalker heavy units can take those hits anyday........end result zero units. the moment you hear the shelling you should pull back you just carried on running in.
6) much like sentries you seem to hate zealots aswell. think i only saw 4 the whole game. zealots are great tanks they soak up the hits and let your other units survive longer.
7)18mins in, only started researching level 1 weapons...
8)1 forge and you had 1500 mins and 1000 gas in the bank....get 3 forges and do research on all of them.
9) late game when your not mineral starved you should be looking at putting pylons around the whole map. you didnt proxy once and all your pylons were at your base
10) no unit group controls. well there was one for 20 stalkers when you had voids and other units in the game aswell.must have been a pain to select them all the time.
but yeh all in all pretty good, get used to sentries and zealots more, get forges, start tech earlier (much earlier), and play around with hullicination.
