Soldato
Agree with Raymond I think. The Timpson sign in particular is quite distracting. Even if you just pull down the red vibrance a bit it might bring focus back into the b/g..
kd
kd
Nah, 12.8k (effective), was shooting at 2.8 so used a splash of flash but probably didn't need to.
'Pop' isn't really my style, I'm more of a low contrast fan personally, I find something about it a little nostalgic.]
I understand the feel you're going for and i like it. The shadow overcasting the great expression is what i mean though. Just lighten it up a bit.
In the second shot it's much better. No shadows across the face. Just enough to bring the viewers focus to her.
Can imagine this style of editing on some egg shell paper.