Not much to be harsh about. The second to last is a nice shot, especially.
One point. In the final shot, your shutter's at 1/10, which obviously isn't really fast enough to make the image that sharp and her hand is blurred from movement. You're at ISO1600, so can't really get faster than that through AP. My advice would be to meter normally in AP, see what it's giving you and then switch to manual and just raise the shutter speed a bit. Underexposure by a stop or so is easy to recover when post-processing a RAW and would improve the image.