Another check my CV

Shikkaka · 3 Jul 2007 at 19:13

Job interview tomorrow. Need opinions and quick.

Thank you muchly

http://files-upload.com/344520/CopyofCV.doc.html

Mp4 · 3 Jul 2007 at 19:22

the link does not work

Shikkaka · 3 Jul 2007 at 19:24

Mp4 said:
the link does not work

works for me

neoboy · 3 Jul 2007 at 19:25

EDIT: me I suck it works.

Shikkaka · 3 Jul 2007 at 19:25

you waiting 4 the timer 2 count down

seaviewuk · 3 Jul 2007 at 19:27

works here

OK,

two instances of 'license' replace with 'licence'

take out 'and' from 'hardworking and individual'

Shikkaka · 3 Jul 2007 at 19:32

seaviewuk said:
works here

OK,

two instances of 'license' replace with 'licence'

take out 'and' from 'hardworking and individual'

done, thank you.

fendi · 3 Jul 2007 at 19:40

Change "who has been an essential requirement" to "which have been"

mole90 · 3 Jul 2007 at 19:43

Scam · 3 Jul 2007 at 20:08

I've only got time for a brief look, but your qualifications dont actually say what they are? They just have grades.

Shikkaka · 3 Jul 2007 at 20:31

Scam said:
I've only got time for a brief look, but your qualifications dont actually say what they are? They just have grades.

Can see what your saying but I wanted to keep it to two pages.

I'm actually taking my CV with me to the interview, they don't have it already so if needs be i can explain.

Gigi · 3 Jul 2007 at 20:45

Meh - ignore, just read post above.

semi-pro waster · 3 Jul 2007 at 20:59

I can't help feeling that "I am proactive and not afraid to take the initiative." is a little tautological so it might be better to choose one term or the other and use it in another sentence.

This involved staying on the line with the customer till the issue had been resolved or until an engineer had been booked. When booking an engineer is was my responsibility to arrange for the correct part to be ordered and agreeing a suitable time with the customer, for an engineer to visit.

I'd change this to something like 'This involved me working with the customer to resolve the issue or if that was not possible to book an engineer. When an engineer was required I was responsible for ordering the correct part for the customer and agreeing a suitable time for an engineer to visit.".

who has been an essential requirement in both my previous and current employment.

If you want an alternative to fendi's suggestion then you could perhaps put 'who has been an integral member of the team in every company I have worked for' or similar.