Do you really want to emphasise how many doors it will open for you? Or at least in that particular way as it could read as if you are itching to go elsewhere before you've even started.
I didn't write that as an intent to leave after training, but to show how versatile chartered accountancy is. I guess it may sound like I want to move on. Reckon I should write something like,
"Chartered accountancy is a diverse, versatile career which can be applied to many businesses and industries across the world." ?
Have you considered condensing it but keeping the general feel the same?
I feel that all the stuff is relevant, but I would like to simplify it. I just don't want to take anything out of it which may be important. I'll try and condense it.
When I wrote it, I wanted to structure it in three main paragraphs:
Why I'm applying to the company
Why do I want to do the role
What can I bring to the business.
Do you think it's a good idea to move the entire third paragraph and place it on the head of the CV as a summary?
Thanks for the suggestions.