PermaBanned, I'm being blunt but your diary is rubbish.
Forget cups, weigh everything. Forget generic entries, be specific. The food database is absolutely massive so if you had Hovis bread, search the database for the specific type of bread you had as the calorie content varies massively between brands. An average slice of supermarket white bread can be anything between 80 and 120 calories depending on the type. Cheese is another example, most cheese in the UK is included so be specific and weigh it properly.
Cups are a dreadful form of measurement and are pretty useless.
Regarding the breakdown, in reality if all you're trying to do is drop a few pounds then it doesn't really matter what you eat providing you stay under your calorie limit.