You vs Natsufires(T) - Antiga Shipyard
Your split could use work, I personally send my workers to the mineral line, build the worker than split. It can take some practice and it's slightly harder as Zerg but it's a small point.
You're not building your drones quickly enough.
You should always send your first Overlord to cross positions on a 4player map. It can catch proxies at the Xel'Naga and it's just what everyone does.
I would personally drone scout sooner, if he doesn't have gas you should be going 15hatch, 14pool and then decide whether you want to get Speed, Roaches, Multiple Queens, drone then a third etc...
You went 3 hatch before gas which isn't really a good build against Terran because without speed, roaches or banelings you'll die to marines.
Only build 1 spine, you should be creating a wall with 1 queen, 1 spine and 2 evos. It can be either next to the hatch or it can be at the natural ramp.
When you expand (Your third and natural) there should be an overlord over them so they can't bunker them without your knowledge.
You shouldn't go Baneling and Roaches.
Roaches are good for early pressure, all-ins or against puremech (They don't work against MVP's Thor/Hellion/Banshee style)
Banelings are useful against all compositions even mech if he's not got a good spread (which a lot of mech players don't do). Baneling and Roach drops also work but it's one of those gimmicky styles which requires some less than basic control.
Lair should be started way before you did. Atleast your +1 Armor should have been done by now. (10:14)
No baneling speed = You should be morphing them closer. (11:35)
You've made all these lings yet you're not fully saturated at any of your bases.
Don't use hydralisks ever. They should only come out against Protoss (Stargate) or as a hail mary against fast Mutalisks (Infestors or your own Mutas is the correct choice) OR the incredibly rare Sky Terran composition.
That leads onto my next point. You need to have some kind of Lair tech unit (Mutas or Infestors). Infestors is the better choice and Mutas are only good on certain maps (Although some pros use them on most maps. DRG)
You can win against bio with just Ling/Bling but your upgrades are nowhere to be seen and you're not making enough drones or expanding enough. Once you have the middle on Xel'naga which you do then you should expand to the middle and the base next to your main (the other bases natural third).
Your scouting is non-existent, you don't know what he's doing so you can't react properly. He's on 2 base, he's going bio and you're clueless. There's nothing wrong with sacking 1/2 overlords, all Zergs do it.
Also have an Overlord on the third spewing creep when you get to lairtech.
You've gone Hivetech but no Ultralisk Cavern or Spire? You've got enough money to do anything you want atm.
Also no Pathogen Glands for the Infestors you should have got a while back. (20:27)
Not sure why the Terran left, he hadn't lost yet with the units he had at home and his huge bank.
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Just about to watch the ZvZ you gave me.
