All right, I've done something I rarely do and marathoned most of the the game at my friend's, despite watching an entire let's play already but apparently that wasn't credible enough.
This is going to be long, sorry... I might repeat some bits.
Nothing's changed. I think this is the worst written story with such high production value in recent years. I'm talking purely about STORY here, not graphics, not some good little moments here and there, setpieces, some interactions. The game can have all that and still be poorly written.
I cannot fathom how some guys lap it up so easily or how they relate to characters having zero development throughout the entire game, coming and going with no buildup or exposure. Incidentally, those are the same guys throwing around insults like "incels", "agenda" and other hilarious crap.
Dina? She has NO development through the entire game, her only defining moment is "I'm pregnant" and getting beaten up by a roided gorilla (theater fight was hilarious btw
) and kissing scenes with Ellie. I didn't get to know anything interesting about her.
Jesse is even worse, nothing interesting happens with the character until he gets shot randomly and never ever mentioned again till the very end.
Abby? What did I get to know about her to make me care? That she's the daughter of NPC#120 that I was forced to kill and she's scared of heights? That she ****ed some Owen who is equally bland and undeveloped? Why did I have to go through a 10h DLC and still have a character so poorly explained and fleshed out? It did nothing to make make me think such an amateur twist they built THE ENTIRE plot around was "masterclass" writing. Why didn't I even get to know how she had built and was able to maintain such muscle mass with this lifestyle and setting? Sorry, she gets the most flak because they clearly wanted her to be the protagonist. Why didn't you just go all out and make her one? Why lie in trailers switching Jesse with Joel?
You should've just built the entire plot around your new stronk wahman hunting down Joel and killing him in the end. It would have still been better than this jumbled mess that doesn't know what it wants to be. A revenge story without revenge? A flashback within flashback? A multiple-perspective narrative? An introduction to new characters? A hackneyed "cycle of vengeance" story? All of that at once in 20h? Good luck when everything is so half-assed.
The rest of the cast? Lev? Yara? Anyone? Why should I care? What was their purpose in this? To make Abby look good? The game is goddamn 20+h long, yet most of it is combat room padding and flashbacks, even flashbacks within flashbacks because the game knows what's happening isn't nearly interesting enough so it desperately jumps back and forth.
What are the WLF doing? The Seraphites? Nothing? No interesting background info?
But yeah, best story ever, better than 99% of TV shows definitely. Maybe if you're easily wowed by graphics and animations. And some little moments that I admit are good. Exploring Seattle with Ellie was the highlight.
The 10h DLC included in the base game is completely external to the main narrative and introduces even more poorly defined characters. By the time it's over, it feels like the main plotline is in the past. It's hard to even say stuff about the main plotline since it's just a basic revenge story without the actual revenge ever taking place. They did the most cliché thing possible with the ending.
Ellie herself is bland as hell. I didn't get much of a glimpse into her suffering except one flashback with Joel and that really funny moment when she kills a pregnant woman and feels remorse when she had already murdered dozens of people who might've had families and friends. Making the game dark and brutal simply doesn't work if you can't build it up properly and operate on cheap ways to sell the plot. Oh, there were some cool guitar scenes. Oh well.
Tommy and Joel act like complete dumbasses in this. It's like they never had to survive in this world. "Oh, hi, I'm Tommy and this is my brother Joel. By the way, we have a settlement nearby with innocent women and children so if you happen to be bad people, feel free to come and kill someone." Joel not only doesn't attack pre-emptively when the encircle them but doesn't even try and lie about his name in order to survive when he gets shot. "What? Joel Miller? You've got the wrong guy"
"Nah, let's get this over with, I don't care"
They just casually follow Abby into the cabin, normally they'd at least take away her gun and slowly check the surroundings or even risk dying on their way back without going into a den of armed strangers. However, their original character traits are weaker than the plot armour.
Ellie is equally stupid. You open a door with a gun in your hand and you see the most important person in your life lying in a pool of blood barely breathing. How long do you need to shoot the **** who did it in the back? Just long enough to get jumped and beaten up by her cronies? I would've been shooting like hell, something that, ironically, Abby does immediately when Jesse runs into the room and gets killed.
On top of that, you lie there screaming you're gonna kill them all but they let you live anyways. No harm in that, after all it'd make them equal to Joel. Not that they'd just shot a guy in a leg with a bloody shotgun, tourniquet his leg and tortured him with a golf club. No biggie.
There are quite a few of those little decisions that make it all seem artificial and out of character, I won't even touch upon the ending because no one will probably read this all and even if, they'd have been exhausted by this point.
The bottom line is, the plot is such a mess in this that I can't even write about it in a calm and collected manner because there's so much to cover. I don't think it's worth it anymore, though. If people want to see this as masterclass writing and believe everyone who disagrees is an incel, bigot or an idiot then whatever.
It'd be easier to overlook some of the above if TLoU1 wasn't so razor-sharp in its delivery but the way it is I simply cannot pretend that I've been moved or impressed with 2's writing.