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Matblack said:
Some from tonight pretty much straight out of the camera :)

Constructive input is always appreciated

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Maybe try under exposing it next time, to try and get more of a silhouette effect? Like the pictures of the quoted below

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Love them! Great Colours!
 
Yarde said:
These aren't vert recent at all, i just would like some comments and suggestions for improvements please! as everyone that has commented on them has never said anything bad! Please be REALLY REALLY REALLY picky!

As i things like this really help me!

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So PLEASE pick up on the smallest details! no matter what they may be!
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Ok, you sound like you really want some crits so here's my take on your pics! :)

1) Ultimately this is not a very interesting photo. Although the effect you've gone for has worked, the angle and composition don't maximise the effect. Most people take them from bridges to get multiple snaking lines. Why not try from somewhere different that's going to maximise the effect (not necessarily a motorwey bridge).

2) Water looks great and the boat is fine but it doesn't grab attention.

3) Again, the shot isn't overly interesting and you've just chopped off the edge of the writing, when you have a primary or secondary subject I always find it's good to keep a margin around the border. Same with any strong shapes.

4) There's nothing particulary wrong with this shot, although it's SLIGHTLY blurry, perhaps closing the aperture a touch more would have kept the front blade all in focus which might have helped with the seperation.

So, that's my take on your photos. I was being critical but I will say all your photos are well exposed and your white balance isn't bad either.
 
Mint_Sauce said:
Ok, you sound like you really want some crits so here's my take on your pics! :)

1) Ultimately this is not a very interesting photo. Although the effect you've gone for has worked, the angle and composition don't maximise the effect. Most people take them from bridges to get multiple snaking lines. Why not try from somewhere different that's going to maximise the effect (not necessarily a motorwey bridge).

2) Water looks great and the boat is fine but it doesn't grab attention.

3) Again, the shot isn't overly interesting and you've just chopped off the edge of the writing, when you have a primary or secondary subject I always find it's good to keep a margin around the border. Same with any strong shapes.

4) There's nothing particulary wrong with this shot, although it's SLIGHTLY blurry, perhaps closing the aperture a touch more would have kept the front blade all in focus which might have helped with the seperation.

So, that's my take on your photos. I was being critical but I will say all your photos are well exposed and your white balance isn't bad either.
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THANKS! Thats exactly what i was looking for, really criticle comments that'll help me, i'll have another go and come back :p
 
where did you take the first one from ???


idea: few newcastle/north east ocuk-ers meet or is it a waste of time creating a thread
 
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