nice pose. Looks slightly underexposed on my monitor (only very slightly.)
Edit... i take that back. I think i would add a touch more fill light (during raw conversion) to balance the ambient a bit. Her face is well exposed.
The Edited version of her (pic 1) ?
Hmm I'd say it's perfectly exposed for what the image is showing, she's perfectly exposed all round, on my monitor anyway (calibrated recently of course).
Colours are rich and image is sharp too as well as composition being sound.
Pretty much just the kind of picture you'd expect to see!