COMPETITION - Design a System Landing Page for Xenomorph & Predator - WINNER POST 282
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I've spent way too long on this than i had originally planned lol.
After removing the alien/laser, the middle was completely dead, tried the acid, but ended up looking very off. Didn't know what else to put in the middle so ive devided it up and made the whole thing look like a computer screen/ish.
Anyway, time to wash the car.
After removing the alien/laser, the middle was completely dead, tried the acid, but ended up looking very off. Didn't know what else to put in the middle so ive devided it up and made the whole thing look like a computer screen/ish.
Anyway, time to wash the car.
I've spent way too long on this than i had originally planned lol.
After removing the alien/laser, the middle was completely dead, tried the acid, but ended up looking very off. Didn't know what else to put in the middle so ive devided it up and made the whole thing look like a computer screen/ish.
Anyway, time to wash the car.
//orgasm
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I need to learn how to photoshop, and quickly!
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Am I the only one who can't view Raz's latest?
It loads a tiny bit then disappears.
It loads a tiny bit then disappears.
Yargh...
Non Copywrite Stuffs Design :S
Edit: Re-upload border messed up
Edit2: Re-upload...I SAW A SQUARE...SQUARES ARE BAD
Edit3: Re-upload...Having trouble finding somewhere for the ocUK Logo
Sorry the logo's look "out of place" i don't know what to do with them Q_Q
/Johnathan
Would love some feedback please, thanks! ^^
/Johnathan
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IMO....
There's a bit too much going on
Overuse of glow effects
The case doesn't 'fit' into the rest of the image
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Couple of things stick out to me.
First the glow around the case, especially on the red side looks over contrasty and a bit distracting.
Secondly the 'customise and buy' on the right looks weird being so see-through compared to the other one.
I think the case is a bit too 'clean' aswell, but not sure what you can do to change that.
Other than those things i think its great.
First the glow around the case, especially on the red side looks over contrasty and a bit distracting.
Secondly the 'customise and buy' on the right looks weird being so see-through compared to the other one.
I think the case is a bit too 'clean' aswell, but not sure what you can do to change that.
Other than those things i think its great.
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Oh wow razer, thats lovely!
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some really great designs in here ! goodluck to all of you, wish i could do something like this 
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Some amazing designs in here. Stunning!
And just like the logo thread, a graphic designer (obviously) signs up and runs away with the thread
It's very nice though, Razerlution.
Superb effort by Skippi too.
Still a few days left
Of course, I was speaking of the efforts thus far
From the current crop, only Skippi and Sp00n are leading the way in terms of layout and professionalism imo.
Well I look forward to your offering then sir!
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And just like the logo thread, a graphic designer (obviously) signs up and runs away with the thread
It's very nice though, Razerlution.
Superb effort by Skippi too.
I'm not so sure he is tbh.
Thanks Rob.
Hope to have a completely different entry in for this time next week. It's ridiculous how much time I've spent on this already.
