COMPETITION - Design a System Landing Page for Xenomorph & Predator - WINNER POST 282

Hi,

Thanks for the comments and suggestions. Really appreciated.

Ill have a look at putting the text infront of the scan lines, thanks Sp00n.

Robboftw said:
And just like the logo thread, a graphic designer (obviously) signs up and runs away with the thread :p

It's very nice though, Razerlution.

Superb effort by Skippi too.
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Nope, no graphic designer, software tester ;) Did some photoshop at college and been playing around with the program ever since. More of a hobby :) Thought it would be nice to have an actual goal for a change lol. (And yeh, the case is nice! :D)

And I agree mine is definately not as "clean" as some of the other entries. A lot of nice ideas floating around here no doubt.


Raz
 
Razerlution said:
Nope, no graphic designer, software tester ;) Did some photoshop at college and been playing around with the program ever since. More of a hobby :) Thought it would be nice to have an actual goal for a change lol. (And yeh, the case is nice! :D)

And I agree mine is definately not as "clean" as some of the other entries. A lot of nice ideas floating around here no doubt.


Raz
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I knew it! :p

It's a very nice effort though. There are only a few things I'd change and tweak, but then I spend hours tweaking everything about anything I do. And it's even worse when you're designing for yourself. Every idea gets scrapped and you start again. :(
 
Robboftw said:
And just like the logo thread, a graphic designer (obviously) signs up and runs away with the thread :p

It's very nice though, Razerlution.

Superb effort by Skippi too.
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Its not over yet :D I bet like myself a lot of people won't put it in till the end, so as not to have ideas stolen.
 
skippi90 said:
I knew it! :p

It's a very nice effort though. There are only a few things I'd change and tweak, but then I spend hours tweaking everything about anything I do. And it's even worse when you're designing for yourself. Every idea gets scrapped and you start again. :(
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Know exactly what you mean. Mine looked completely different before i eventually stumbled onto that style. The only thing that didnt change were the cases :D
 
Razerlution said:
I've spent way too long on this than i had originally planned lol.

After removing the alien/laser, the middle was completely dead, tried the acid, but ended up looking very off. Didn't know what else to put in the middle so ive devided it up and made the whole thing look like a computer screen/ish. :confused:

Anyway, time to wash the car.

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I like it :cool:
 
Robboftw said:
Indeed, though that may be due to the fact its so small.
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I'm not sure. There's a lot of unnecessary information there. It needs to be cut down IMO as it's all in the page the button links to afterall.

And then there's the 'tech' brushes for the rig names. Some of the 'less bright' customers may think there's info there that they can't read.


I'm not being overcritical I don't think, but they're things to consider that could improve his entry.

Finally, the cases themselves look out of place as if they're just floating there. See Raz's for how he integrated it with the background more. The fan brushes used are very nice.
 
I wasnt going to do this, infact I only said an hour ago, I wanted to wait, bit looking at them and fiddling is doing my head in, so they're going up and I'm done and dusted.

1- Copyright problem
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2 - NO copyright
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ChroniC said:
Yeah could, might stick a planet in or somthing. Just keeps things even and tidy. Might just lift everything up a little.
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Bloody planets. I knew I should have posted mine later. :(



I joke, I joke! :D

Your first is my fave so far with Gord in second and Sp00n in third.
 
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Much prefer the second one, less cluttered, nice one. Good to see someone break the red/green trend. I'm going to try and refrain from posting mine till the end though.
 
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