Looks like you're doing a fine job there, all looks like it's wired up correctly so far

Couple of things though....
1) Do those ESC's not have a BEC and is that why you are using one? Only asking as I thought all the afro ESC's had a BEC?
2) If that's one of the FT952 or TS5823 vtx's, you may want to use an LC filter on the power line. I've had 4 of them now. 1 was DOA, 2 Popped the minute I plugged them in and the last one is still going, but had terrible interference from my ESC's when I powered up until I installed the LC filter. Might just have been my ESC's.
3) Oh, and if the MinimOSD has had the 5v mod done already, don't accidentally put 12.6v through it. Don't ask how I know that.