I'd always go FFE against Zerg, it takes a while to get the hang of it but it's pretty simple.
Gateway was late. (12 or 13 gateway.)
First Zealot was way late. He could have pressured with lings too easily. You also want to setup your wall like this.
http://wiki.teamliquid.net/starcraf...outh_one.jpg/798px-Xelnaga_wall_south_one.jpg
I've seen at least two short pauses on work production, it snowballs so keep an eye on it.
Put your probe behind his third. If there's no third by 5:00'ish it means he's going to be putting on pressure at some point in the future.
Another pause on workers. If you want to go double gas then it's best to place the 2nd Assimilator when you place down your cybernetics core.
Still no block. You'd be dead from any pressure at 4:17. A good Zerg would atleast throw a ling up and see if you've expanded.
Your opponent is quite terrible. He's going for a economic opening but not actually taking his third and floating loads of minerals cos of it.
5:49 -You moved out with a stalker and a Sentry. No need for it and a much more common move out time would be with your first Stalker/Zealot and that's only if you make them as soon as the Gateway allows.
The Stalker/Sentry just reached the opponents base. You didn't check for the third.
You don't move your observer in to see what tech he has or his third. (you just did)
10:04 - you place down your 3/4th gas on your expansion. I would have expected you to do this sooner as Protoss is a very gas-heavy race.
By 10mins you should have chosen your tech path. Place down the twilight council for templar tech or robo bay for collosi.
You just placed down both which isnt a bad idea, i'd expect a third pretty soon tho.
Ok it just went down XD
To stop ling runbys it's popular to block off the third with gateways.
You need to keep replacing the observers you lose that are over his base. If you dont know what he's doing then you can't react. He could have gone mutas and then your collosi tech would be worthless.
Get double forge once you're on 2/3base. You'll easily be able to afford it.
Move over your workers from your main to a less saturated base when it starts to run out of minerals. You should be on atleast 4 bases at 17mins.
Pretty sure I didn't see any warpins while you were fighting which is why you couldn't keep up with army size. He can keep defending with cheap as chip roaches.
I wouldn't have switched to HTs as Roaches dance in storms.
You didn't clean up the burrowed ling on your fourth which has delayed it. At this point you've stuck on 3bases too long and you're about to be overrun.
Storm damage doesn't stack so if you use 3 storms then it won't do 3x the damage.
It's 23:34 and I hve no idea what this guy is doing. He has the bank to build an army of whatever he wants and he just isn't. All the way through the game his minerals have been insanely high.
26:54 - OMG HES FINALLY GETTING BROODLORDS! After having the damn Greater Spire for like 5mins.
Just finished watching. You played way too passive and didn't keep an eye on him with observers. Also you need to expand more.