The haiku thread

Nitefly said:
I'm taking that this is something that just doesn't work in English as it comes across as pretentious twoddle.
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Perfect for GD by all accounts.....:p





It's pretentious twoddle in any language, but with a bit of skill and careful placement it can get you laid......:)
 
Yes, I do want to bet. Because in order for me to lose I'll have to get laid by posting haiku in GD.

In GD bet was made
Now all that remains is
For me to get laid

EDIT : ABORT ABORT. ABORT. NO. !

Sorry Nitefly. No!
 
OMNOMNOMNOM.

Just pulled this from wiki:

Just friends:
he watches my gauze dress
blowing on the line.
Alexis Rotella (After an Affair, Merging Media, 1984)

meteor shower...
a gentle wave
wets our sandals
Michael Dylan Welch (HSA Newsletter XV:4, Autumn 2000)

Little spider,
will you outlive
me?
Cor van den Heuvel (Haiku Anthology, 34d ed. 1999)
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That is dreadful.
 
Hana to mishi
yuki wa kinou zo
moto no mizu

The snow of yesterday
that fell like cherry petals
is water once again.

Simply beautiful.
 
Yes! Come in! I cried
but out at the snow hung gate
the knocking still continued

Time to fire up the Jean Shepherd show in which he wanders through a winter haiku wonderland...
 
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