I picked up Fear the Sky on your recommendation Glaucus and I'm really struggling the writing is horrific, an example;
As she said, she remembered, with a well hidden smile, the name of the incident, and hoped her reading habits, .......
It's death by comma and I found it really jarring throughout.
Despite that I actually enjoy the idea but struggling to get past the writing. Does his writing improve at any point? I'd put up with the pain, if there was some light at end of the tunnel, otherwise, I doubt I can, cope.