This thread started as a challenge - as in i believe anyone can do after a conversation.....
My first blast was more rhyme based/straight up picture of what i want
Hey yo this is El, ra-ta-ta ta-takk/ you know im back with a brand new rap attack/ i grab the mic like a pimp called the mac/my temp so hot i do nothing but melt the track/you read my views in here and you can tell im untochable cuz Dons can do no jack/ Maybe i love controversy like your average rapper loves Hennesey/ Cant you see i bet my money on chelsea not to win/......
Immediately i posted that, the thread got derailed, then from there it went onto people turining it into a battle and taking shots even though i asked for freestyle NOT BATTLING. See page 1 of the thread. Even after i explained AGAIN, people just carried on, so i went away for a while. Then when i came back, i saw my name in every freestyle posted so i thought i might as well do the battling thing with them.
Most of the thing i posted after that were deemed rubbish, it is there view and yeap they can hold on to it
Below are some of the
rubbish apparently
I came in here with loads of respect
But this dudes, geeks and warriors gimme somthing i didnt expect
Gilly and mohinder all up in my face trying to disrespect
CBS with your thin veiled insult im more than happy to break your neck
but the dons dont wanna see that so i suggest you all keep in check
So in effect when next i open another thread, i demand respect.
Half of the warriors in here aint got no skillz
Mohinder please, you are a bald ginger trying to be ill
I suggest you go pop some pills so as to get your thrills
How many kills can you make with your spit drills
The abulity to freestyle is exclusive like house of beverly hills
.....El im out...No im back
I microwave suckers in millseconds
Dont bother or try to reckon
I do this like gone in 60 seconds.
Now from my second freestyle, i think anyone can easily lay out what im about. i rhyme words and im straight up.
I represent the new breed of O C U K
60% of you cant even me like madam Bouqet
The rest have no style no substance but just a cliche
Hence i put you where i want, on the shelf like a dummy display
El's got you guys in check, holding you still like your favourite hair spray
Im ok im all right and im doing good
My style my flow is not from the hood
Yet most things is i say is completely misunderstood
Seriously i hate to brag, but you know im good
If my dick was a gun i would be El Eastwood
But here am i eating them like sea food
All you warriors watching, trying to have a go, my advice is never bus' a rhyme
Until you are sure you can come correct in real time
The same method i used here, yet im completely written off.
I dont know what you came here for
You aint half as strong, you are drunk and wearing your mother's thong
Some one better tell this dude before i crack his jaw
I studied your rhyme but it is filled with flaws
You need to go back home and practice more
One word to describe your rap - it is a bore and im starting to snore
The difference between me and you
My rap is a blessing while yours is uterly depressing
Yeah you know it so i suggest you start confesing
You dont bring a knife to gun fight
So go back home and get it all tight.
This one is against chris R, i kinda liked it, it fills me with rage when im saying it. Dont know why!!
The whole point of battle rap is to take rhyme and word to new heights
This i can do without hesitation any time day or dark night
I was on the sideline when you dragged me into the ring
Now i pounced on you and flingbang you just to show you im the real king
This king aint even wearing no bling just straight linguistic string
Now your cry for help is falling on deaf ears
Watch YOUR supporters as they give me the cheers
When i look in the mirror i see me, i see elrazur
But what do you see? you see something that cut faster than a laser.
When next you wanna battle, make sure it aint me.
Another picture painted here with simple words but they just dont like it.
How can you win when i have the crown
what? the simile on your face is turning into a frown
Come on man you can do that, cuz you are the clown
Now im steeping out of the door
let me see you get the mop and clean the floor
That's what you get for steeping up to someone bigger than you
Now bow down and kiss the ring.
This was one of the short one as im starting to get bored! But i still find it funny.
Tried and Tested and the next thing that comes to mind is the word detested
it is clear with your views you are totally defected
To one side of the forum who thinks this style is whack
This is the real guiness and it is totally black
Im not even gonna rhyme the next word with jack
But if you wanna battle just say so.
This is for someone i dont think he even deserve a reply.
Anyway GodyR i do hear what you are saying but when im inthe mood to freestyle so to speak, i can string rhymes faster than a boeing 77 in flight, i put my punchlines as you can see and i tend to paint a picture just the way it should be. I only see myself not using metaphors but im trying to incooperate that into my freestyle.
Watch most freestyle battle in real life, people keep it simple and entertaining, and that's some of the verses i dropped have been doing.
Im off to the library now, you draw the first blood and im coming back to murder you in cold bloodied lyrics.
PS
Those who says im doing gangsta...erm, im freestyling here so any subject matter goes but since this is ocuk maybe different sort of rules apply, what makes anyone think i havent hold guns here before?, im not claiming to be a gangsta either..... You dont know me and i wont say more than that.
My style is simple, entertaining yet filled the rage....do the maths!
