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Gilly said:
Where are you getting picked on??

You've been saying this for weeks, and never have I seen snipes or people picking on you. Everything you get you bring on yourself...


What, your picking at my sig aint doing it for you no more but then you gotta pick on my spellings?....... Charming

Maybe if you open your eyes, you will see it but you wont...birds of the same feather...

You know what, im not gonna get this thread close, im out on the sideline.
 
Otacon said:
Because your ego turns threads to ****?


Where? Everything you've had back has been in retaliation to stuff in your sig, or your 'raps', and nothing over the line, just on par with your own stuff.

If you cant take it, don't dish it out.

What ego? maybe you find it difficult to be neutral when it comes to El's case isnt?

Where....no i meant why!

Im out.
 
Hey yo! so many things i need to get off my chest
Before i proceed let me load my gun and put on my bullet proof vest
there loaded!
So many unwanted guest, i feel like i should put them to rest
Im talking of eternal rest through a cardiac arrest

Like i said before unlike craig david i wasnt born to do this
Having said that dont think you can ever diss me
Home boy i pick this stuff up as i go
So give some credit like your pay-as-you-go
I am undisputed cuz lyrically im a lyrical ho

Picking on my signature, only give me the fuel i need
Seriously it aint gonna go and it gives me the need to see you bleed
The speed at which i squeeze can only see you leak
your whole entire red substance coming out of your vein
Use my .44 magnum to spill out your whole punney brain
Stand on your slained body and shout out WHO'S NEXT
I have a dream like the Black Hero called Malcom X
I see vision of me beating down suckers at the next meet that make me vex
So watch what you say 'cause it might come back to haunt you
I dont do no comedy when i rap, this straight talking so seriously, watch it you dont wanna get it.
 
Carzy said:

Haaa haaa *chokes** Haa HHaaa **Chokes again**

I honestly dont care, say what you want! I guess things i say is not what you are used to. Oh i dont crack you up like your monthy python and andy&lou rappers in here......

I dont even believe im replying to this......you know what stay blessed.
 
chris_r said:
all a joke, fight back
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Chris you alright man, I dont wanna battle you for now, let me wait for these suckers and see what rubbish skillz they've got up there sleeve.

I sometime feel it is a uphill battle! Im rapping in a forum filled with Rock, guitar and punk loving dudes, those who think girls aloud are better than destiny's child, rely on wiki for 99% of what they claim to know in here and dont forget those who just jump on the band wagon.... they just wont understand. Proof? If someone can say gilly is a better freestyler or rapper than me then i rest my case.
 
This thread started as a challenge - as in i believe anyone can do after a conversation.....
My first blast was more rhyme based/straight up picture of what i want
Hey yo this is El, ra-ta-ta ta-takk/ you know im back with a brand new rap attack/ i grab the mic like a pimp called the mac/my temp so hot i do nothing but melt the track/you read my views in here and you can tell im untochable cuz Dons can do no jack/ Maybe i love controversy like your average rapper loves Hennesey/ Cant you see i bet my money on chelsea not to win/......

Immediately i posted that, the thread got derailed, then from there it went onto people turining it into a battle and taking shots even though i asked for freestyle NOT BATTLING. See page 1 of the thread. Even after i explained AGAIN, people just carried on, so i went away for a while. Then when i came back, i saw my name in every freestyle posted so i thought i might as well do the battling thing with them.

Most of the thing i posted after that were deemed rubbish, it is there view and yeap they can hold on to it

Below are some of the rubbish apparently

I came in here with loads of respect
But this dudes, geeks and warriors gimme somthing i didnt expect
Gilly and mohinder all up in my face trying to disrespect
CBS with your thin veiled insult im more than happy to break your neck
but the dons dont wanna see that so i suggest you all keep in check
So in effect when next i open another thread, i demand respect.
Half of the warriors in here aint got no skillz
Mohinder please, you are a bald ginger trying to be ill
I suggest you go pop some pills so as to get your thrills
How many kills can you make with your spit drills
The abulity to freestyle is exclusive like house of beverly hills
.....El im out...No im back
I microwave suckers in millseconds
Dont bother or try to reckon
I do this like gone in 60 seconds.

Now from my second freestyle, i think anyone can easily lay out what im about. i rhyme words and im straight up.

I represent the new breed of O C U K
60% of you cant even me like madam Bouqet
The rest have no style no substance but just a cliche
Hence i put you where i want, on the shelf like a dummy display
El's got you guys in check, holding you still like your favourite hair spray

Im ok im all right and im doing good
My style my flow is not from the hood
Yet most things is i say is completely misunderstood
Seriously i hate to brag, but you know im good
If my dick was a gun i would be El Eastwood
But here am i eating them like sea food

All you warriors watching, trying to have a go, my advice is never bus' a rhyme
Until you are sure you can come correct in real time

The same method i used here, yet im completely written off.



I dont know what you came here for
You aint half as strong, you are drunk and wearing your mother's thong
Some one better tell this dude before i crack his jaw
I studied your rhyme but it is filled with flaws
You need to go back home and practice more
One word to describe your rap - it is a bore and im starting to snore
The difference between me and you
My rap is a blessing while yours is uterly depressing
Yeah you know it so i suggest you start confesing
You dont bring a knife to gun fight
So go back home and get it all tight.

This one is against chris R, i kinda liked it, it fills me with rage when im saying it. Dont know why!!


The whole point of battle rap is to take rhyme and word to new heights
This i can do without hesitation any time day or dark night
I was on the sideline when you dragged me into the ring
Now i pounced on you and flingbang you just to show you im the real king
This king aint even wearing no bling just straight linguistic string
Now your cry for help is falling on deaf ears
Watch YOUR supporters as they give me the cheers
When i look in the mirror i see me, i see elrazur
But what do you see? you see something that cut faster than a laser.

When next you wanna battle, make sure it aint me.
Another picture painted here with simple words but they just dont like it.


How can you win when i have the crown
what? the simile on your face is turning into a frown
Come on man you can do that, cuz you are the clown

Now im steeping out of the door
let me see you get the mop and clean the floor
That's what you get for steeping up to someone bigger than you
Now bow down and kiss the ring.

This was one of the short one as im starting to get bored! But i still find it funny.

Tried and Tested and the next thing that comes to mind is the word detested
it is clear with your views you are totally defected
To one side of the forum who thinks this style is whack
This is the real guiness and it is totally black
Im not even gonna rhyme the next word with jack
But if you wanna battle just say so.

This is for someone i dont think he even deserve a reply.



Anyway GodyR i do hear what you are saying but when im inthe mood to freestyle so to speak, i can string rhymes faster than a boeing 77 in flight, i put my punchlines as you can see and i tend to paint a picture just the way it should be. I only see myself not using metaphors but im trying to incooperate that into my freestyle.
Watch most freestyle battle in real life, people keep it simple and entertaining, and that's some of the verses i dropped have been doing. :)
Im off to the library now, you draw the first blood and im coming back to murder you in cold bloodied lyrics.

PS
Those who says im doing gangsta...erm, im freestyling here so any subject matter goes but since this is ocuk maybe different sort of rules apply, what makes anyone think i havent hold guns here before?, im not claiming to be a gangsta either..... You dont know me and i wont say more than that.
My style is simple, entertaining yet filled the rage....do the maths!
 
Nitefly said:
Stepping back out and kicking again, back to the top, putting the rest of this whole thread to shame,
For I start, I rap. Isn't it clear, that every single mother ****** is writing POEMS in here?
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Yeah so true, only few attempt to rap so far.....
Oh people are judging poem over rap when the OP clearly states "Can you freestyle or rap"
Maybe then we are seeing are style of rap "Poemtery"
 
Sic said:
hahahaha, oh my god, you're the lamest excuse for anything. ever. i never claimed that i could rap, and i went on to prove that i cant! you're the one who thinks he's the next Tupac or some crap like that. i mean, really...when are you going to get over yourself,

Oh....so i pushed the buttons then?
Now dont be nasty and try insulting, im the one that's supposed to be upset but hey i guess that plan backfired. either ignore me or take your own medicine.
 
Sic said:
you always push buttons. i find it impossible to ignore you because you never make any sense and constantly contradict yourself. i never planned to upset you - i honestly didnt expect you to cry about it...just wanted to get a message across.

Homie, seriously i am cool. I try to express myself but sometimes you guys forget english aint my first language and im still adapting. Along the line of evolving so to speak there's gonna be times people think im odd (ignorant, contradictory etc) and this can lead to situation like this.
If you speak my language maybe you will see my view point sometimes. Nevermind though i like the challenges.
 
Davey_Pitch said:
A poem can be a rap, it's all in the delivery
And reading your raps, man it was killing me
You think you're dope, you think you're the best
But you really gotta lay that ego to rest
You see your raps are poor, with bad pronunciation
That's why we greet Gordy's rhymes with much anticipation
The guy can write a poem, the guy can write a lyric
And I think we all know a good rhyme when we hear it
You don't need to talk like a gangster to be a rapper
After a while, it just sounds like idle chatter
You need to get yourself some more vocabulary
So I present to you the Oxford English Dictionary

;) :D

Listen man, all those things you say is wrong and you got at all twisted
My spellings might be poor but my incredible rap flow persisted
I never lay claim to be the best but could i be one of the best yet?
Dont forget this is meant to be a freestyle event but turned into spellolymics
So dont blame me you get the wrong boat and it all turned catastrophic.
GodyR writes what he writes and i do what i do
Gangster this gangster that, obviously most of you dont have a clue
As soon as i mentioned guns, it suddenly becomes a taboo
You all need to stop, seriously check yourself and ask who is who
Don i suggest you read up other people's culture and way of life.
 
Davey_Pitch said:
Man you need to wake up, you need a reality check
If you think you've seen the best I've got, you ain't seen nothing yet
My first rhyme was a tester, to see how you'd react
It seems you took it personal, but I expected that
You want to be respected, for your "incredible rap flow"
You might get what you want if your flow wasn't a no show
I asked you to get a vocabulary and it seems that you did try
You even took to making words up, just to comply
What the hell is spellolymics? It doesn't sound like much fun
But I guess it beats the hell about you rapping about a gun
"So dont blame me you get the wrong boat and it all turned catastrophic"
I wanted to see what the next line was, but I guess you had to stop it
For someone who claims to be a rapper you don't know how to rhyme
I guess it's not your day job, so you only do it part time
So you say you're not a gangster, and you know what that's cool
People are much more comfortable, thinking you a fool
Why do I need to ask who is who, I know who I am
It seems you're the one who's confused, a boy playing at being a man
I think I'll end this here, I think our time is through
I've got threads to lock and people to ban, now I'm through with you.

Fo shizzle.

Hommie i have to go back to basics now cuz i see you are STILL getting it wrong
I see you tried but STILL isnt good as a matter of fact closer to rubbish, so im gonna show you how is done
Jealousy and envy i see it your lines, what a shame just bcuz El got you Outrun
You claimed to be the Don, but i doubt you know the meaning
Not a suprise you dont have a clue then try to Demean me
How can you claim to be the Don and not know Spellolympics?
Oh i get it! Wiki aint showing it so it becomes a difficult mathematics!
Well let me keep you in suspense, and upset all your kiss-behind-fanatics
Still on the word spell-olympics, Oh that reminds me of a statement
"Dont say Homie because that makes you retarted"
Aint it typical? what you dont understand should be disregarded?!
Come on man, dont make me throw no punch while you are unguarded
Nah, No more mr Nice guy. Spell Olympics is a spelling competion held in schools in America

El never take any of your "Bull droppings" personal as a matter of fact, i see you as a friend
Seriously i see you more like a blind friend, im trying to explain the colour of the rainbow to. So im gonna give it all and not even pretend
But there is so much i can do, when ignorance and rebellion is abundant on the forum.

my rap flow, i still maintain is incredible
if the stuff im spitting is a food,
It will be marked 100% totally edible
But i guess no matter how i manipulate my words
and come in with the right punchlines
It will never be deemed credible

On this forum, i feel like steve seagal, im marked for death
But you cant kill me as i will NEVER run out of breath
As a matter of fact i should take the hat and be the don
but on second thought lets leave the toilet cleaning for the cleaners
El's got bigger fish to fry!
 
dmpoole said:
(nearly).

Hey man, i like your straight up talk. Ok so you want me to up load a track of mine? Honestly i dont wanna but the way it is going i might have to, im thinking of a better idea. HOW ABOUT ALL THE EXCELLENT "FREESTYLERS" IN HERE COME TO THE NEXT LONDON MEET FOR A LIVE PUB BATTLE?

Now that's a good idea, that way we REALLY know those who are good with keyboards and those who can really do it! :)

No disrespect Gilly need not apply unless he practice hard and pray for a miracle, he cant even fake it

(judgement based on what i heard). :)
 
I rest my case, experiment concluded.

Trying to explain the colour of the rainbow to a blind audience is an impossible task. Period.


PS
Take a four bar beat in your head (preferably hiphop beat and recite those stuff ive written to it).
 
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