Anyone can do it.....can you

[ElRazur]

You thought i was long dead and all's done
Body burnt, ashes scattered & some placed in an Urn
"Will he be back?"
"We aint so lucky here" was the reply from the Don
I sit back and laugh as i see what's really going on
Snitching & bitching all in my name just to get me on the run
I guess the ploy is to get me upset & make me tense
PC screen shows my name stuck before & after most sentence
This is dumb, stupid and complete nonsense.
This i think deep down inside my conscience
"Hold on El, you got so much work to do
so give them time, plenty of time
to speak evil of you"
And that's what i did
I came back when no one expected!

Now watch the whole thread come alive
as the news spread that El survived
Despite all the odds against me,i still thrive
Like a roach living after a nuclear strike

Like train on a rail, you cant stop me
With the rhymes in my head
You cant move me
Like your grand ma big pants
You cant touch me

As a matter of fact, im one of the best yet
The all round poet laureate.
im out.

 

[ElRazur]

It is so crystal clear that 90% of those who contributed in this thread dont have a clue about hiphop. All judgement are so biased i just laugh and see the flaes in them.
Anyway, actions speak louder than words.

 

[ElRazur]

Yes, and you've been conspicuous by your absence for a long time. Must've taken you a while to google all that

You know that none of the people posting in here bar you have been entirely serious at all points in this thread, right? That can't have passed you by. So mocking them for their lack of hip'hop knowledge is a trifle stupid, because you're judging them on what we managed to turn into a half decent funny thread.





I guarantee you that had Mohinder and I not grabbed a hold of this thread it'd have no stars and no life.

This thread cost me a lot, i left the referencing part of my Uni project until the last minute. Hence me going away to sort it out. My GF unplug my wireless box and took it off as a punishment and im off work.
All the things have done so far is straight from me. I think it should be fairly obvious from my posts i dont tend to look up on things when im debating.
On the issue of stars i dont know why people keep refferring to it? i am not claiming any credits for the star at all. Im just happy peole are able to express themselves in here in everyway.

EDIT
As per the hiphop knowledge, i think me saying otherwise will be silly really. If it rocks your boat that you know better then fine
Oh by the way the "100% edible line" was straight from the head too, that verse was an ebonics influenced style - that the way i speak in real life.

 

[ElRazur]

It just seems to me that you feel hated on. Which really isn't the case, and is solely indicative of the ego you have.

No-one is picking on you.

However, some people may have thought me egotistical before you arrived, when quite clearly in light of your posts this is not the case whatsoever, so for that I thank you

It dont bother me one bit at all, and that's the truth. It is a forum, i just laught it off.

 

[ElRazur]

And spoken words speak louder than written actions. I'm still waiting to hear you do your thing. I need to hear the hip-hop truth from someone who understands it better than all the rest.

Are you gonna go on wax or not?

How about i keep the whole thing up in the air for now? just hanging, Not knowing what way it will swing.

EDIT
I dont claim to understands better than the REST but some.

 

[ElRazur]

Then you need to act like you're not bothered

I do, if only you see me behind screen but sometimes the excitement get the better of me and i appear to be all upset and stuff, but i think it is kinda weird staring at the screen with my gf in the room and im getting all worked up.

 

[ElRazur]

.

Clearly another display of someone who knows hiphop inside out.
It is freestyle, get it? freestyle. There is no rule of thumb asking you to rhyme your first four lines, secondly style flips as one raps along.

You judge me again coming from the stance of some one who expects freestyle rap to sound like poem and poettry.

 

[ElRazur]

Who cares if you've returned,
its just a shame thats all, that you obviously haven't learned,
you tried to rap, and you tried to freestyle,
you even moaned about bieng bullied for a while,
but one thing you failed to do, was show us what you could do,
you stayed hidden away as everybody ****** all over you,
now you think you've returned like some kind of messiah?!
let me tell you bud, you ego couldn't get any higher,
walk away now, with your last bit of respect,
before your reputation on these boards gets well and truly wrecked,
come on dude, let it go and let it be gone,
or else I'll be calling my homie Otacon.

Awwww. I thought we are friends? Ok here's a mini for you -


All your lyrics i totally dismissed
So im gonna pick what i want from the flow list


Please, call your homie Octagon
while you're at it, ask him to come along
By the way, dont forget to borrow Pitch's thong
So you can all dance to Elton's love song
From nowhere an Apache comes on
El's flying the beast, system armed and radar locked on
One flip of the switch, a big blast and all's done
I come out shout allahu akbar and dat's how El won.

 

[ElRazur]

It's not a freestyle. It's a written rap, and a poor one. A freestyle is when you're rapping from your brain as quickly as it comes to you, and I sincerely doubt you can type as quickly as you think. You would have been thinking as you typed. You probably would have deleted or re-written a line or two. There's absolutely nothing wrong with that, but it's not freestyling, it's not even close to it. Trying to say otherwise is foolish.

Man, the idea of the whole thread is to test a freestyle/rap ability right? I see your argument but you dont wanna see mine. When you are freestyling, words are pronouced in a diffrent manner or stressed to suit a particular flow, that's what people are missing out here.
Everything i say, come straight and i type then down, when i push hard is when it is filled with errors and you can notice from my post i go back to edit them once i see it.
Pre-notioning that going against your idea could be considered narrow minded.

 

[ElRazur]

El, are you a producer or something? (despite your poor rhymes).

I dont see myself as one but i have a few bits and bob, my first post in here ever was to ask for the cost of a music pc. I have tried my hands on making tracks and few home recordings and that is about it. I havent done anything since last year though, due to my flat engulfed in fire and most of my stuffare still in storage.

 

[ElRazur]

I'm not missing it at all. To the contrary, I've tried reading your lyrics in the style of several rap/hip-hop artists, ).

Try Ebonics?

 

[ElRazur]

Ahh ok dude. Just wondered.

When you gonna record this emceeing then?.

I have exams in two weeks - my final exams. Maybe then i can give it a go.

 

[ElRazur]

Do it now its a 5 min job just freestyle what ever comes into your head and lob on a free hosting site

See, this is what im trying to avoid all along. I honsetly dont have a mic here at the moment. My whole stuido is in storage, please be patient i will do it at my own time.


***cant believe im getting sucked into this.

 

[ElRazur]

LL Cool J?

That's actually an old school flow he took. Iirc it will be Dj easy e and someone old school rapper rapping on the track.

 

[ElRazur]

who wanna host the lil freestyle?

 

[ElRazur]

all i see is a man with chain saw?? what am i suppose to do? Sorry i honestly dont know.

 

[ElRazur]

I'll offer to. Genuinely, I cant wait

I can swear to god i felt my spine shiver after reading that ......***shiver and quivers***

 

[ElRazur]

[email protected]

I will send it via msn.

 

[ElRazur]

whoever, doing one to dmpoole now but taking ages to upolad.

 

[ElRazur]

Any progress on this upload being made yet?

Two sent to octagon and one on its way to billytheimpaler!