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CliffyBiro · 30 Jul 2010 at 17:14

StewartMG said:
@Skipdiddyskip: Top two corners feel a bit empty, not sure what you can do about it, just chucking it in there

Yeah I know. Threw it together in 30mins. Don't really want to be spending too much time on it.

shifty_uk · 30 Jul 2010 at 17:14

For a £300 case, I think it deserves a few more minutes work

Locky · 30 Jul 2010 at 17:15

Spoon one is great, But the text needs changing on it, font is hard to read, overwise a winnor!

Cosimo · 30 Jul 2010 at 17:15

Marky said:
Sp00n is definitely my favourite one at the moment!

Same here.

CliffyBiro · 30 Jul 2010 at 17:17

shifty_uk said:
For a £300 case, I think it deserves a few more minutes work

Even the globe at the top is ripped off, but hey, if they're going to seek copyrights...

geekyEd · 30 Jul 2010 at 17:18

up the brightness skippi, and more logo's, he said he wanted logo's dammit! (good for space filling.

NiCkNaMe · 30 Jul 2010 at 17:21

skippi90 said:
Even the globe at the top is ripped off, but hey, if they're going to seek copyrights...

How much do you get paid in your day job then skippi? I'm presuming circa 100k?

CliffyBiro · 30 Jul 2010 at 17:22

NiCkNaMe said:
How much do you get paid in your day job then skippi? I'm presuming circa 100k?

3 Flumps and a DibDab.

Django x2 · 30 Jul 2010 at 17:42

Here's my 7 minute effort. Lost the will to live, as I'm not very creative therefore, it's a WIP

Stewy · 30 Jul 2010 at 18:05

No offence, but just looks like a random collection of images.

Django x2 · 30 Jul 2010 at 18:11

StewartMG said:
No offence, but just looks like a random collection of images.

Yeah, that's pretty much it

No offence taken

shifty_uk · 30 Jul 2010 at 18:30

Not got any good composition ideas for this yet, coupled with me not really knowing the characters, their form, armor and whatnot. If anyone could point me in the direction of good references?

I'll just throw this 10 minute sketch into the mix for composition, maybe give you guys some ideas?

LiE · 30 Jul 2010 at 18:39

I think the composition is excellent - it would look fantastic fully rendered.

CliffyBiro · 30 Jul 2010 at 19:08

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http://creativenerd.co.uk/ocuk/

Robbo · 30 Jul 2010 at 19:09

I like that Skippi. Nicely done.

Maybe a tad too much black on the right hand side, move the Alien over a bit

Azza · 30 Jul 2010 at 19:12

They don't have Core i7 inside skipp.

Robbo · 30 Jul 2010 at 19:13

Azza said:
They don't have Core i7 inside skipp.

Well spotted

Also, isn't it Xenomorph, not Xenophorm?

CliffyBiro · 30 Jul 2010 at 19:17

My google skills have failed me.

EDIT: Fixed.

CliffyBiro · 30 Jul 2010 at 19:25

shifty_uk said:
Not got any good composition ideas for this yet, coupled with me not really knowing the characters, their form, armor and whatnot. If anyone could point me in the direction of good references?

I'll just throw this 10 minute sketch into the mix for composition, maybe give you guys some ideas?

http://www.ryanarts.co.uk/temp/ocuk_sketch1.jpg[img][/QUOTE]

Predators don't use guns, or atleast not like that. :)

Though you could switch it with a spear? Or have it targeting the alien with it's shoulder cannon.

I'm envious of your skills. That looks really good for just a sketch.

Tefal · 30 Jul 2010 at 19:29

shifty_uk said:
Not got any good composition ideas for this yet, coupled with me not really knowing the characters, their form, armor and whatnot. If anyone could point me in the direction of good references?

I'll just throw this 10 minute sketch into the mix for composition, maybe give you guys some ideas?

That's amazing, even more so for a 10 minute sketch!?

My drawing makes cyanide&happiness looks like a masterpiece