Internet Dating.....Who Has Done it?!

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Raymond Lin said:
redone my profile.

http://www.plentyoffish.com/member8212465.htm
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Ok, you kinda stole things from my profile and basically sound like me, but not as funny.

You fail sir.

Mine -
and to look at hot girls. I've realised, I want to meet hot girls so why don't I sign up.

Yours -
There are lots of hot girls on here and ultimately I want to meet hot girls so why not sign up?

You also call yourself a tit which I did and say FACT when trying to be sexist.
 
Anewbe4u said:
Ok, you kinda stole things from my profile and basically sound like me, but not as funny.

You fail sir.

Mine -
and to look at hot girls. I've realised, I want to meet hot girls so why don't I sign up.

Yours -
There are lots of hot girls on here and ultimately I want to meet hot girls so why not sign up?

You also call yourself a tit which I did and say FACT when trying to be sexist.
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lol, I actually thought I had read that line before, but thought it may have been part of his profile before he re-did it lol.
 
So when you actually meet a girl, what you gonna do? Sneak out for a bathroom break and come on here asking me for advice?

The FACT bit you clearly took from mine too. Thief.
 
Raymond Lin said:
I admit, i like that first line, but the rest i just wrote it off as i went along. :p
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Also, just to actually critique your profile as I can't help but be helpful.

It comes off as if you're trying to hard to be funny and no offense, I don't think it works. There are some good bits in there (my bits mainly) but I think a rewrite is needed.

Then again, I'm not a girl, maybe they'll love it, let us know if the messages start rolling in. I'll copy yours then.

That's a FACT :p
 
But one thing, you shouldn't have to say at the bottom, don't take this seriously. If it works, they just know. If not, I doubt the girls would be suited to you anyway.

EDIT - Just to point out, I'm in no way qualified to actually give advice.
 
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As a bloke reading it, it sounds boring and you'd put me off because you whine a lot about what you don't like.
Doesn't come across as funny at all.
Sorry dude
 
you seem to be getting a little to worked up about someone using a couple of lines from your profile!!!

If anything OCUK should come up with a super profile so we can al get some action!!
 
Personally I think that reads a lot better, you come off as a little cheeky now instead of obnoxious.

Also, you took my stuff out, tehehehe.

Good edit. B+
 
kempythe2nd said:
you seem to be getting a little to worked up about someone using a couple of lines from your profile!!!

If anything OCUK should come up with a super profile so we can al get some action!!
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Imagine pouring your heart and soul into something, something you worked on for 6 weeks solid, something you planed to sell as a guide to picking up fugly chicks and then having some one else use it, badly.

He's improved it now I personally think without resorting to using any of my ideas.
 
OMG I just got a reply, after the 5th Read/Deleted message of the day, 6th times the charm obviously lol. Now, the big question, will she reply to my reply :P.

p.s. I know it's pretty pathetic to come on here with OMG etc etc, but I'm actually shocked lol.
 
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